| Title: Lightning Crashes
| 09 Mar 2011 5:36 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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You must have been bitten by the ENERGIZER BUNNY! Definitely, I would love to see you continue this story! Thanks for waking Lily at the end of this chapter-- now we can wait for her reunion with Harry! :-) (Glad the Dursleys are out of the picture-- their own private Harricane! Hee!)
| Title: Lightning Crashes
| 09 Mar 2011 4:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Alex (Anonymous)
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I'm really looing foward to reading this. It's so different and I just think it's really good. Also not sure if anyone mentioned this but when Voldemort's is destroyed you forgot the d in wind
Wow, you continue to amaze me with each story. I really like this in so many ways: Severus is a healer not a DE, Lily is still alive for her son now that he has lost everything (again) Harry has a special power that is not due to Voldy and to boot a very interesting plot line.
What more can I ask for? Oh, I know, please continue. Thank you. Kim
Way cool begining! Please continue as you have the time.
V.
Very interesting. I do hope you can continue it soon.
| Title: Lightning Crashes
| 09 Mar 2011 6:18 am
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| Reviewer: Whitetail (Anonymous)
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Eek, what an original idea! I love it! The ending was great and it was awesome how you worked the fire of London into the history of stormcallers! Please continue this! I also liked how Snape talked to Lily even though she was asleep, it was nice.
Great first chapter SG! Please don't give up on this! i wanna know what happens next!
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