I would love to have a fruit trees garden :)
You spelled Evan Rosier's first name as "Even."
great chapter!
Thanks for posting.
V.
Hi, there! ^___^ Great story so far!! I love the fact that Lily is still alive and (as I think you know by now ^^) I'm addicted to all kinds of stories with lessons between Harry and Sev in it. I liked your Yorkshire accent. ^__^ Anyway, if you want a very cute and detailed example of Yorkshire accent, I can only recommend reading "the secret garden". Have a great week and update soon, if you can, your Melfis.
Great chapter, I am really excited that Harry's tutoring is starting. I have been looking forward to learning more about Harry's ability, it is a really original idea!
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| 05 Jul 2011 5:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Happy 4th to you too!
Loved this chapter, so much going on and so many new things for Harry to learn. Theo made me laugh with his ghost tales and I think he'll become a brother to Harry.
Lily and Lucy sound like they have a lot in common too. I hope eventually Lily will come to love Severus and marry him.
Brilliant job!
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| 05 Jul 2011 5:33 pm
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| Reviewer: LeeRoy (Anonymous)
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Awesome. Simply awesome. Update again soon, please.
This was awesome!
I loved Theo's ghoststories and how Harry doesn't quite believe in them. The boys look like they'll be good friends. Harry needs one.
I also liked how Lily has found a friend in Lucy and what she said about her marriage to James made a lot of sense. I felt bad for poor Lucy, losing her husband that way and getting kicked in the ass by her parents. They should just love their grandchild and to hell with whether or not he can do magic or limps.
I hope Harry doesn't go mad.
Poor Theo!
Great chapter! I loved the conversation between Lucy and Lily. It made sense, because purebloods believe in blood supremecy. I felt sorry for Lucy, with parents like that. Theo also. Lily's forthright and practical manner is very refreshing. I always felt 17 was way too young to be getting married, you're still a kid at that age, never mind that it's legal. It's the same when you're 18 in the real world. You can vote and drive, but getting any kind of decent job at that age is almost impossible nowadays, and most kids today don't even know what they want to do with the rest of their lives, much less make enough to support themselves and pay for a car, never mind a family.
I loved the scene at the end. Hope Theo will be okay. Beautiful story!
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