He felt his mouth go dry and another part of him stir with desire as he admired her lovely figure.
*snickers* Best line by far. *nods*
You didn't really describe what our Sevvy wore to swim in though. Was it trunks or some kind of early 20th century full suit get-up?
I mean really, DOES he have chest hair???
| Title: Fly Like a Bird, Swim Like a Fish
| 23 Aug 2011 3:30 am
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| Reviewer: Testa204 (Signed)
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What a unique story so far! I love the way Harry can manipulate the air currents - very creative. I enjoyed the bit in the pond - very lighthearted and sweet!
| Title: Fly Like a Bird, Swim Like a Fish
| 21 Aug 2011 10:57 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Harry's certainly learning control the hard way. It was good to finish with a fun time in the pond and nice for Theo to have an advantage for once.
| Title: Fly Like a Bird, Swim Like a Fish
| 20 Aug 2011 5:16 pm
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| Reviewer: LeeRoy (Signed)
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Since no one has yet reviewed this chapter, I'll be you first. As I said before, GREAT JOB! Update soon.
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