Title: Storm Building
| 10 Sep 2014 6:52 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Yes, I know part of the plot is that Harry is young, stupid, ignorant, and impulsive, but it seems like while he is still in training he and everyone else should be willing to shackle his magic during storms to prevent trouble. Yikes! Nice suspense writing.
Oh, no. Well, I suppose Harry will finally know the truth of how much control he can maintain - just hope its a good outcome and that, assuming he survives, no-one else is hurt looking for him. Here's hoping the next chapter comes along as fast as the last few have!
Oh my goodness, poor Harry trying to play the martyr. What will his family do when they find out that he's not there anymore? Please update again soon!!!
Ohh Harry! I hope he will be alight. And strong enough not to let the storm get him.
The preparation for the storm was interesting. I hadn't expected Harry to go off on his own though. His family and friends will be frantic.
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