|
Reviews For Lost Treasures
I also like Ambrosius, even if I think he is acting a bit too calmly for someone who just found his father and brother. But the only thing that is really bothering me a bit, is that the Dursleys tried to kill Harry. Yeah, they did neglect him and that is bad enough to make everyone feel sorry for him. But actually beating him half to death? I think that's a bit over the top and unbelievable. I hope this won't be a big topic here, so I'll continue reading for now.
Author's Response: no need to worry as i fixed the errors. and yes, i'm sure that this 'farily good story' is in no way as perfect as yours are...am i right?
Author's Response: thank you for telling me, i believe i've fixed my errors!
If you can find a beta it can only improve an already good story.
As for the Dursleys, they should either be thrown in jail for life or made to be slaves for some rich wizarding family just as they treated Harry for all those years.
|
Powered by eFiction 3.5 |