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Title: Telling Snape 09 Apr 2019 3:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you very interesting
Title: Telling Snape 01 Feb 2014 2:23 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love the idea of Severus' children being taken away from him, making Harry his son. That'S a really good explaination and a different take on it.
    I also like Ambrosius, even if I think he is acting a bit too calmly for someone who just found his father and brother.

    But the only thing that is really bothering me a bit, is that the Dursleys tried to kill Harry. Yeah, they did neglect him and that is bad enough to make everyone feel sorry for him. But actually beating him half to death? I think that's a bit over the top and unbelievable. I hope this won't be a big topic here, so I'll continue reading for now.
Title: Telling Snape 26 May 2012 11:49 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Waste of blood :)
Title: Telling Snape 31 Mar 2011 7:20 am
Reviewer: LioSaoirse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You really need a beta! The grammar and mechanical errors are incredibly annoying when reading a fairly good story.

    Author's Response:

    no need to worry as i fixed the errors. and yes, i'm sure that this 'farily good story' is in no way as perfect as yours are...am i right?

Title: Telling Snape 28 Mar 2011 6:00 pm
Reviewer: Marie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's an interesting story, but I think you should find a beta. You have a bunch of spelling errors, you spelled Ambrosius's name 3 different ways in this chapter. It's really distracting to read.

    Author's Response: thank you for telling me, i believe i've fixed my errors!
Title: Telling Snape 28 Mar 2011 3:01 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The story flows well, though moves a bit fast. It really needs some editing though as there are way too many mispelled words and improper use of words -- ie: noded I've sense -- since.
    If you can find a beta it can only improve an already good story.
Title: Telling Snape 26 Mar 2011 4:57 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad that SEv is reunited with his sons. I can't wait to see how harry reacts to this news.

    As for the Dursleys, they should either be thrown in jail for life or made to be slaves for some rich wizarding family just as they treated Harry for all those years.
Title: Telling Snape 25 Mar 2011 1:58 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think making them relive everything they ever did to Harry would be a good start. The neighbors should know what scum they are as they value that so much. I can't help but want to see Severus be the sh-t out of Vernon for what he did to his son. Oh and anything else you want to through in would be good. I am glad that Severus didn't take the news against Harry, but put the blame where it needed to be on James Potter's shoulders. Everyone always says how powerful Albus is so I'm looking forward to what he does to the family.
Title: Telling Snape 25 Mar 2011 11:10 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes Sev get them!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Telling Snape 25 Mar 2011 8:55 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter.

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