Good chapter. The punishment seemed appropriate to me. I've seen other writers give the Dursleys much worse than that. It's also appropriate that they made Dudley think his parents were killed in a car crash and his father was a drunk since that's what the Dursleys told Harry about James and Lily.
I'm glad Harry decided to give it a try.
I didn't think the punishment was too harsh, I liked that they had to tell everyone the true reason why they were moving.
With Dudley though, as much as I loathe his actions, I do feel he is a child whom should be taught the consequences of his poor choices in hopes that he might see how his previous ones were harmful to another, and therefore....deplorable....and maybe he might make better choices in the future. Therefore; I hope he'll be adopted by another family who could teach him the proper way of treating fellow humans. (Not as a part of this story....just in my imagination! LOL!)
Great Chapter! So now will Harry be Harry? Or will he want to take on Aubrey? This will be an interesting journey.....
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