| Title: Premonitions
| 09 Apr 2019 7:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good plot planning thank you
This was a great chapter! I'm glad Ginny is okay and that Aubrey saw what was going to happen in time.
Poor Draco! I hope he gets away from Lucius. Oh, and did you know that some words in this chapter are underlined and in different colors, like mask? Is that something that just happened, because it looks weird, almost like it's a hyperlink.
| Title: Premonitions
| 15 Apr 2011 10:31 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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loved this chapter. I hope that all will like both boys and not everyone against Harry since he is snapes son
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