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Reviews For Lost Treasures
Exciting chapter. Good work.
I'm glad they won't be dark anymore but how will they convince the Aurors of that?
In case you aren't aware, Lucius is autocorrectind to Luscious. It is very distracting to read, and may be making this seem funnier than you intend. You may want to correct that. If not, that's okay too. It's a good story! Author's Response: you're right, my only excuse is that i'm using a dinosaur aged computer when i right and it's always autocorrectiong everything i type. i appreciate the corection. thank you again for your review
I enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the update. V. |
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