I really like how you’ve portrayed Draco. He’s still sneaky, but in a helpful way now!
These little letters at the end are funny and also not.
I am enjoying this and cannot wait to see what will happen next. I'm personally glad that there is some romance. I always liked Ginny and Harry and, let's face it, he deserves some happiness!
I'm dying to know why Snape hates Harry so much and why he lets his other son behave in such a way towards Harry. Will it all come out in time or will it be helped along by a certain potions prof finding the journal of a certain young boy?
| Title: Just A Girl
| 02 Apr 2011 8:13 am
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| Reviewer: Eowynn (Anonymous)
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Love the start of this. My mind keeps jumping at all the possible twists this story could take. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
| Title: Just A Girl
| 01 Apr 2011 6:44 am
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| Reviewer: Celestialuna (Anonymous)
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love it?!?!
yeah, love it!
You are doing a really good job, especially love Draco's role in here :D
| Title: Just A Girl
| 30 Mar 2011 11:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love this but would love to know how Harry knows he is Severus' son and if Kenai knows Severus must be telling some people. Please can we have some explanations on when harry found out ad everyone else thanks
Please let something good happen to Harry for once1 it's so sad :(
Is Snape going to find this notebook he keeps writing in? cause I'm gonna be really upset if he does...Kenai is a huge jerk. I hope something really bad happens to him!!
Aww, Harry & Ginny love, how cute :D I really like this story, and I think it's super original. I feel so bad for poor Harry, hated by his dad and brother :'( I wonder why they hate him so much. Can't wait to see where you take this! Update soon ^^
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