| Title: Survival
| 04 Apr 2011 11:25 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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wow great strory i think that snape a great deal have to explain. i can't understant how someone can bully there own kid or give the kid the guild of something his parents did. if i was harry and i was sixteen i don't gave snape a new change. but thats me.
Reject the bastard, Harry! He doesn't deserve you!
I love this story! Please update soon :) Will Snape ever read Harry's journal?
mmmm. nice. he should have read the journal! LOL that would be a nice wakeup call
| Title: Survival
| 04 Apr 2011 5:25 am
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| Reviewer: topsell (Anonymous)
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Ahh! I really love how this is progressing - honestly, this is one of the more unique Snape as Harry's father stories I've read in ages and I cannot wait to see how it ends up!
I do hope that Snape has a better explanation for leaving Harry with his relatives - though you are very right in saying that his is a fallible human being and that he doesn't always make the right decisions.
/fingers crossed for more chapters soon/
this is a great story! keep up the good work!
| Title: Survival
| 04 Apr 2011 5:05 am
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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I'm looking forward the 'fun' part =D
And I'm curious about the next chapter more than ever. ...Update soon, please? =o)
| Title: Survival
| 04 Apr 2011 4:37 am
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| Reviewer: Kat (Anonymous)
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Ohh. He called Harry son.
I'm excited to read on!
Okay, I like, but I honestly think Harry should really make Severus suffer. I mean he is blaming Harry for Lily getting even? Yes I can understand a need for family, but what Severus has done, he should suffer. I mean based on last review i did and your response, he totally needs to get his ass kicked cause this was actaully all his fault at first... and I think Kenai needs an ass kickign as well. I mean most in his situation in the qizarding world would have gone dark. Kinda suprised Voldie hasn't tried to convince him to go dark for vengeance...
Author's Response: Oh just wait until chapter 10 or 11, you will love the whole Voldemort thing.
Oh, some a break down here. It seems they can form a family after all, the three of them.
Like you said Sev s just a human so he make mistakes, but still I'm kinda supriced that he left his child after Lily death... that he wouldn't take his son back. Yeah, I understand he transfer grudge he had for Harry's mother and James for child... ppl are stupid sometimes, well more then sometimes, and that is good example. It based on our way of world seeing and we can't even control it much, can we?
Ah, hope it all will change and improve!
I like way you do progresses with relatonship and emotons in story!
Author's Response: Thanks
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