| Title: Only Human
| 10 Apr 2011 11:04 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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I feel bad for the snape boys the whole situaltion sucks , More please!
Ooooooh, this was so, so, so good! I really can't wait for more!
OK i love this chapter. Yet again a sure stroke of genius!
As for what i think should happen i think that Kenai and Harry should sort of bond over there mothers being treated that way by their father and make it really difficult for sev to be let in to both of there lives again!
Good Chapter. I've always thought that to many storys had Harry and Sev forgive and forget far to quickly. I really don't think Harry is the type to hold a long term grudge, but Hurts like this don't heal over-night.
You are doing a marvelous job of showing how each of the three Snapes are feeling and how it comes through in their behavior.
As for what I would like to see. . . somehow it would seem right if K.S. and H.S. called some sort of truce before either really "made up" with their father. But, your story is so wonderful, I'm just looking forward to where you go next.
Thanks for the update.
V.
I rarely review, but after reading what you said in the shout box, I had to offer a bit of encouragement. When I see your name on a story I always know that it will be a good one and I haven't been disappointed yet. Keep up the good work, some of us may not say much but we're here enjoying your work.
Author's Response: Thanks for the support. That is always appreciated.
| Title: Only Human
| 10 Apr 2011 4:04 am
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| Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous)
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I'd like for Harry and Kenai to sulk together about their mother's heartbreak. And maybe visiting their graves with Severus?
wow. that's..that's really interesting.
poor sev, though. i hope he can get his son's back and soon!
It will be interesting to see how Severus fixes this...but why do I feel like Harry will make the first move....?
Great chapter!
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