I love that they’re going to try being brothers. It feels like a more manageable step than Snape repairing his relationship with Harry, which I’m guessing is a long road ahead for them. Though perhaps Harry and Kenai becoming close will be a catalyst for them all coming together.
Oh, two Snape's together with Weasley products. This is going to be awesome. The chaos. The anarchy. Hogwarts won't know what hit her. Snape and Umbridge won't know what hit them.
| Title: Just A Brother
| 19 Oct 2019 4:02 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I really hope Harry isn't willing to just let Kenai be his brother like that. He tormented him, it's just that I think both Severus and Kenai both deserve to hurt a lot more
| Title: Just A Brother
| 24 May 2011 2:03 pm
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| Reviewer: meadowphoenix (Anonymous)
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This was a great chapter. That muffing was inspired and I like the fact that Kenai and Harry are getting along. Kids change their minds easier, I think.
One point though: Being able to block your mind is Occlumency, and a person capable of it is an Occlumens. Being able to read minds is Legilimency, and such a person is a Legilimens
| Title: Just A Brother
| 23 May 2011 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I'm glad that you updated. This was great! I thought the scene where Umbridge wet herself due to the drugged muffin was hilarious. Harry and Kenai should not have tried to hold in their laughter; that just made it obvious that they were the ones who did it. Also, Legilimency is how Severus can "read minds" and tell if someone is lying. Will Severus confront the Dursleys about how they treated his son? Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Legilimency is what the art is called, but one who can preform legilimency is called an Occlumens. Thanks for the review.
| Title: Just A Brother
| 21 May 2011 11:38 am
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| Reviewer: Mtwisted (Anonymous)
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Hey! Really enjoying the story. It's an interesting and different approach to the age-old Harry-as-Snape's-kid storyline. So well done on that.
Any chance of getting an update soon?
Author's Response: Summer is coming so I will be updating more regularly on all of my stories. Thanks for the reveiw.
| Title: Just A Brother
| 16 May 2011 9:42 pm
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| Reviewer: marry (Signed)
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I really like the story, but I fink Snape needs to read the Harry's noltbook, and star to like and punnishing Harry and Kenai. Just like brothers, like sons and father
| Title: Just A Brother
| 24 Apr 2011 11:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I love this story so far and can't wait to read more! I'm glad that Kenai wants to get to know Harry now. I wonder what Severus will think of Kenai's lie for Harry.
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