| Title: The Journal
| 17 Jun 2014 11:30 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Wow! I read the first few chapters of this story back when you first started writing it, but I only got as far as the snow leopard chapter. I'm so glad to have reached the end at last-- and a happy ending at that!-- and I enjoyed your "rollercoaster" of unexpected thrills and chills, especially concerning the relationships Harry was trying to build with Kenai and their father. Lovely job throughout, and sacking Umbridge was excellent! Ha! Thanks for the ride! ;-)
this story was amazing! i thought it was going to be one of those snape bashing stories, but i'm immensely pleased that it wasn't. this is really one of my favorites :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Lol, I wouldn't Snape bash.
| Title: The Journal
| 02 Jun 2013 6:47 am
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| Reviewer: Steph (Anonymous)
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I am in love with this story. I love insecure Harry. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Angsty. Severely Angsty but BRILLIANT!! Loved it. Thanks for sharing!
| Title: The Journal
| 19 May 2013 9:21 pm
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| Reviewer: BLEH (Anonymous)
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Love this, very well written and a good story line.
Poor Severus, he is in for a huge self-hating trip whilst reading the journal.
you were right, this was worth reading all the way through, even though it started off sad. I'm glad things began to turn around.
| Title: The Journal
| 08 Apr 2013 1:59 am
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| Reviewer: SRAM (Anonymous)
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If you do continue the story line, you should make it an angst ridden story about Harry, kenai, and snapes attempt to form a family. Obviously, kenai has been a single child for years, as well as has been bullying harry for years, so how will he be able to change his behavior quickly? And snape will have to learn how to deal with two sons. And it should allow us to learn more about Harry's time at the dursleys.
Harry is really very forgiving
Author's Response: Yes he is. I think it's important to be forgiving.
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