I've really been enjoying this story - very different plot line. Keep up the good work.
| Title: Just A Brother
| 15 Apr 2011 5:31 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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| Title: Just A Brother
| 14 Apr 2011 11:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Danielle (Anonymous)
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This is such an original plot line! It is written fantastically as well! Cannot wait to see what happens next :)
| Title: Just A Brother
| 14 Apr 2011 2:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Hmm! Is Severus going to back them up? I think a good scene where he backs up Kenai but makes it clear to him that he shouldn't be messing with Harry and his friends as they are TROUBLE! Perhaps if kenai stands up to him it might make Severus think that he could loose two boys by hurting one. Just an idea but I do think Severus needs a little shake up he seems to think he can waltz back into Harry's life. Great chapter thanks
So I know that I have another chapter to read before I catch up, but I had to say thank you. The emotions ripping that family apart felt so real, my heart aches for all of them. Also, thank you for your reply. I did blame my mom, at first, but then I realized how hard she worked to find him just so I could say happy birthday. She helped me find him when I was seventeen, I called him, made plans for dinner and he never showed. When he didn't answer my calls, or anything really, that is when I finally gave up on him. So keep trying and don't give up, she hasn't. I hope for a happier ending for you and the Snape men.
Well, if they BOTH have detention, there is the chance that they BOTH will have to use the blood quill. Sev will be fit-to-be-tied when he finds out KS has had it used on him, and maybe will also be able to "help" HP as well, by piggy-backing the boy's help he might get a thawing of things between him and his oldest son (at least a slight thaw).
Thanks for the update!
V.
Author's Response: Now there's an idea. They got out of detention but maybe I'll have to find a way for them to be in detention to work out this scenario. Thanks, I'll think about it!
| Title: Just A Brother
| 14 Apr 2011 1:31 am
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| Reviewer: Kai (Anonymous)
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Wonderful chapter! Hmm...next chapter?
I sorta want to see more Snape...so maybe his confrontation with Umbridge when she asks where Harry was?
| Title: Only Human
| 14 Apr 2011 12:25 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for this great depth of feeling and you even made me feel sorry for Kenai
This chapter is yet again amazing! Keep up the great work!
Ooooooh, I loved this chapter!!!
Could we maybe just see some conversations with Harry and Kenai? Or the reactions or Harry's friends? Maybe even Snapes reaction (if that's not planned for later)?
I can't wait for more!
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