Snape finally getting his comeuppance. :) Sweet.
Although his last thought may be slightly hyperbolic.
I'm loving what you've written so far and can't wait to see where you take the story from here. There are so many possiblities!
CF
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I can't believe that, in one chapter, you actually have me liking Kenai now. Poor kid. Thanks for giving me the answers I was seeking!
What do I want? I kind of like the idea of Sev and Harry getting to know each other a little. Kenai isn't ready yet and this causes issues moving forward. Good feelings mixed with periodic angst in my favorite!
| Title: Only Human
| 11 Apr 2011 2:34 am
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| Reviewer: snuffles44 (Anonymous)
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I am loving your story. You write very well and clearly express what the characters think and feel. Update quickly please: )
| Title: Only Human
| 10 Apr 2011 4:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Wow, I always found it hard to write out emotional moments, you did a fine job!
Keep going, can't wait for the next one!
| Title: Only Human
| 10 Apr 2011 12:53 pm
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Yay! Go Lily! I love stories where Lily is strong and does the right thing and isn't all wishy washy!
| Title: Only Human
| 10 Apr 2011 11:04 am
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I feel bad for the snape boys the whole situaltion sucks , More please!
Ooooooh, this was so, so, so good! I really can't wait for more!
OK i love this chapter. Yet again a sure stroke of genius!
As for what i think should happen i think that Kenai and Harry should sort of bond over there mothers being treated that way by their father and make it really difficult for sev to be let in to both of there lives again!
Good Chapter. I've always thought that to many storys had Harry and Sev forgive and forget far to quickly. I really don't think Harry is the type to hold a long term grudge, but Hurts like this don't heal over-night.
You are doing a marvelous job of showing how each of the three Snapes are feeling and how it comes through in their behavior.
As for what I would like to see. . . somehow it would seem right if K.S. and H.S. called some sort of truce before either really "made up" with their father. But, your story is so wonderful, I'm just looking forward to where you go next.
Thanks for the update.
V.
I rarely review, but after reading what you said in the shout box, I had to offer a bit of encouragement. When I see your name on a story I always know that it will be a good one and I haven't been disappointed yet. Keep up the good work, some of us may not say much but we're here enjoying your work.
Author's Response: Thanks for the support. That is always appreciated.
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