These little letters at the end are funny and also not.
| Title: Christmas Party
| 19 Oct 2019 4:41 am
|
| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Kind of feels like in well your notes you kept saying that they wouldn't just jump into a familial relationship but they're basically what they have done. Snape and Kenai haven't even supposed to Harry actually.
| Title: Just A Brother
| 19 Oct 2019 4:02 am
|
| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
I really hope Harry isn't willing to just let Kenai be his brother like that. He tormented him, it's just that I think both Severus and Kenai both deserve to hurt a lot more
So good to read this again.
Thanks for such a raw story!
Ooooh, if this story wasn't complete I would have had so many ideas, but it looks like you already used them. I was expecting a 'Harry-flinches-from-Snape' moment.
Oh, this was really really good, I am liking this story so far and as you gave the warning in the first chapter, I am feeling quite frustrated and sad for Harry.
Oh, that was so sad, it almost made me cry. Almost, I have read enough fics in which there is emotional torture far worse then this. I would have liked to see what Snape would have do if he ever read this diary? Seeing how he really is, he would give it to Kenai so that he can torture Harry some more. Though, I guess I shouldn't judge Severus so harshly, hmmm?
|