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Reviews For My Secret Father
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Author's Response: Thank you for your insight. It is always good to get insight from readers. As a writer it is sometimes hard to imagine just how someone should be feeling as you are writing a story, so having outside help is nice. Thank you in that respect. I wanted to say though that sometimes, I think it is right that they would skip that step because I would imagine if I suddenly found out I had a child, I would not want to continue hating said child, and the same if I found out I had a parent. In some of my stories Snape's realization comes earlier and the hate continues until some pivitol moment when he decides he can no longer go on with the hate. I have also met some people in my life that have just been very accepting of things as they come along, as well as fast to forgive and forget. I'm sorry that you feel some of my stories move too fast. As for this story, I will say that at this moment, Snape's feelings are not all that they seem to be to Harry (although we haven't been hearing from Severus just yet). Harry perceives Severus not to care at all at this point, but we can't know for sure until we hear from him. So, if there is a pivitol point in this story where things change, I hope you will look at what comes after to see any awkwardness that there might be between them, although the hate will probably disappear. Thanks again for your review.
This story is very clever, and Kenai is bad ass even if he can be a dick. He reminds me of Damon from the Vampire Diaries. Great story! Author's Response: Yeah, Kenai is a little hard to write, because I want him to be a jerk but also have redeeming qualities for later in the story. And as for Severus hating him, you'll have to read on to find out! Lol, thanks for the review!
Draco is really making me laugh now too, cause it seems like he's always popping up from behind suits of armour and statues. Hee, hee. So Harry is trying to protect his brother from detention? I don't know why... Is it to try and get in good with his dad? Kenai is a jerk, but I supposed he learned from the best, and that would be Snape. Does it bother him that Harry is named after Severus? I'm really interested in hearing more about their pasts and how things got to this point. Looking forward to the next chapter. :-) Author's Response: No, I think for the most part Harry is done trying to get in good with his dad, but he himself is not always sure of his motives at this point when it comes to his family, regardless of how they act towards him. Remember, when Harry was younger he tried to get in good with them and was shot down, so he quit doing those sort of things with those motives.
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I bet they use the blockquote tag for text in the box.
I laughed though when he got the new jersey. I would have loved to see Snape's face then! Good chapter. :-)
Hermione I think you write well, and it's interesting to see this nice Draco. I liked that Harry went to the the hospital wing instead of Potions, and that Madame Pomfrey seemed to understand. Poor kid. Next chapter! Author's Response: It was pretty pointless on his part to try to protect him at all, but he did it regardless (he's sort of foolhardy sometimes), and once he was into it, he felt he might as well inform this new teacher that they were related (after all, everyone else knows). It's a touchy subject for Harry, as we'll come to find, to not be acknowledged by people as part of the Snape family.
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