| Title: P.S. I Hate You
| 29 Mar 2011 1:24 am
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| Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous)
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I'm enjoying this story, but I have a slight nitpick. If Kenai is three months younger than Harry, then he would have been born in October, and would be in the year below Harry as Hogwarts cut-off date is September 1st. Other than that, it's well-written and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: I haven't mentioned it yet but Harry's birthday is a little earlier in the year. It's also fair to assume that since Severus is Kenai's father, even if he had missed the deadline, Severus probably could have gotten it in. Thanks for your review.
| Title: Just A Girl
| 29 Mar 2011 1:12 am
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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I am curious; Is your ultimate goal that Harry turns dark?
Author's Response: Nope. No dark Harry here. I did a dark Harry story if you're interested though, just check out my profile to find it.
I think I need this another chapter soon! It seems Harry is The One... hm... now I wonder what's with Sirius and Lupin, doesn't exist here?
Author's Response: Sirius and Lupin exist, but Lupin really has no role in this story and because Severus is Harry's real father, Lily did not allowe Sirius to be named Harry's godfather.
Oooh, this one was amazing too! Harry is so adorable with Ginny! I just want to smack Kenai and Snape for this.
| Title: Umbridge Hates You Too
| 29 Mar 2011 12:29 am
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| Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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what you think of this story so far - I think Harry is an idiot, it's nothing new here, but I'm pitting him (again).
I don't really understand whats with prophecy and Voldy in your story, and is Harry still the chosen one?
Author's Response: Harry doesn't even know about the prophecy until the end of book five, and this is Harry's fifth school year, so as of yet, nothing is happening with the prophecy. What Voldemort is doing at the time is cannon... he's loose out there but lying low, letting his henchmen do the work for him. You will see more of them later.
It begins as very interesting and sad story so my type, noneless I like when their relations are good, so I will hope for them and read along.
And of curs your story is 100% OC, but world is well though, how can I say it... well all pieces suits do each other and it's very important and changes to original are quit interesting.
Oh, my word. This is SO, SO, SO good!!! I've never seen anything done like this before. I love that Draco is helping Harry though - I adore Good!Draco. I hope that you'll update this again soon!
I really enjoying this story. I don't know why but Snape ignoring Harry this way appeals to me. Keep on writing.
AMAZING!
I do hope things get better though. Snape and Kenai are so mean! ..but did Kenai give Harry the potion?
I really like this fic!
I can't wait to read more about Umbridge and Snape!!
I like the story concept. And, It is very engaging. Just want to cry with poor Harry. I haven't seen one quite like this before, so I'm looking forward to "where it leads".
Thanks for posting
V.
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