“Next person that tries to push me down the stairs is getting kicked in the stones.” I think that is the most brilliant threat I have ever read a young Harry Potter say. I like the idea for the story. Can't wait to see where this story goes.
Author's Response: Whoo!
OOOH! I like I like! Harry seems to mysterious, acting weaker than he really is. I'd like to see him in action! I'd also like to see how much magic he knows already! Can't wait for more! Really great job!!
Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Mar 2011 12:46 am
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Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Interesting turn of evens... It is looking to be very good story, I'm looking forward the next chapter. Can you tell us more about Harry's past? - about his meeting with headmaster and about his recovery after the car accident?
Author's Response: Thanks. More will come out as we go. :)
OH man, awesome start! Looks like a 'Dark Harry' beginning to me. Not that there is anything wrong with that, I quite enjoy the darker Harry. Sometimes the upbeat ones can get annoying :P (note, I am an author of at least one upbeat one, so I know where I'm coming from). Kudos on a very impressive start. I hope to see more from you.
Wow, great start! I like how different Harry is in this, very different from a lot of fics. Very intriguing, can't wait to see where this goes ^^ Update soon :D
Author's Response: 2nd chapter is already written, but I want to get the 3rd one done before I post it. :P
Interesting. Great concept. I really like Harry's personality; observant and more cynical with a dry sense of humor.
Very interesting beginning. I like it. Update soon :D
An interesting start. I look forward to reading more.
Great start thus far! One question, in the line, "There have some in the past who have referred to Hufflepuff as the house of the ‘leftovers.’” Did you mean to write Hufflepuff or Slytherin? :-D
Author's Response: No, I meant Hufflepuff. :P
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