Great chapter. Harry in this fic is pretty cool. I was worried about him being disabled, but I find relief in the fact that he can handle himself.
One thing that annoys me though is his use of the word "ain't" in this chapter. I quite understand why he would use the word, as he seems to have been living on the street at a time, but in the other chapters, he seems quite intelligent and well aware...it's weird having him result to poor word usage. I'm going to assume that his use of the word is simply because his brave facade was slipping and his guard was down the more upset he got.
I have enjoyed this fic thus far, but I really thought I wouldn't. I just hate reading fics about Harry being physically impaired. Makes me all sad inside...
Author's Response: I'm going to assume that his use of the word is simply because his brave facade was slipping and his guard was down the more upset he got.
- That's the reason I was going with. :)