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Title: Not Working 21 Apr 2011 8:53 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVE that :) Go Severus. Doggone shame nothing can be done about Dumbledore, though.
Title: Not Working 21 Apr 2011 6:01 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    cool Very nice I would love to see where you take this.... I got up to ASL 2
Title: Fighting 20 Apr 2011 12:48 pm
Reviewer: Heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Shoot poor Harry a flashback?
Title: Fighting 19 Apr 2011 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Rye (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really well written, and even though you don't write it in first person, it gives the reader a concrete idea of what Harry thinks, and how he works. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Title: Fighting 19 Apr 2011 8:14 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, now...there you go again. I'm all upset for poor Harry--even though he's NOT weak or a freak.

    Good chapter.
Title: The First Week 19 Apr 2011 4:43 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    Every chapter here ends with me sniffling --good stuff. I really like your Harry. And I like that Moody stepped up for him. It seems that Harry is quite familiar with the crutch and leg, though. How long ago did Moody help him out?

    Author's Response: Well, I figure that he had crutches before, they just didn't have certain aspects of the ones he has now.  As for the leg, hmm, I figure Moody got it for him at least a month or two before school started.  More will be trickling through regarding that later.
Title: Fighting 19 Apr 2011 2:07 am
Reviewer: wandlorean (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very lovely and painful way to end this chapter. Painful because I'm on edge now, anxiously waiting to find out how Snape reacts to Harry's facade crumbling.

    May I say, I absolutely love your Harry? He's much more clever, jaded, and cynical than canon Harry (completely understandable,look at what he's suffered through in your fic). There's a vulnerability inside him, somewhere deep down, but he remains quite hardened on the outside. I really enjoy your portrayal of him and am very much looking forward to the next chapter.

    By the way, the part where Snape reaches out and touches Harry's hand, the very hand that is missing several fingers, just cut me to the bone. Such a small thing, yet so meaningful and poignant. Amazing storytelling here.

    Author's Response:

    Geez, now you're making me sniffle. 

    Thanks.  :)  More to come in the near future.  Snape will be learning more of why Harry is having such a violent reaction NOW . . .

Title: Fighting 18 Apr 2011 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was so sad but well written as always :P I feel so bad for Harry and I hope that Snape can get through to him.
    It really was pretty cool how he messed up Aubrey though haha.
    Really great job! I can't wait to read more of this!
Title: Revelations 18 Apr 2011 7:14 pm
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. I was leery of a "burnt" Harry story because one I read before went a bit over the top by the time it got very far. This is really enjoyable.

    Author's Response: What do you mean by "over the top?"
Title: Fighting 18 Apr 2011 6:13 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what will happen now that Snape has finally broken through that hard exterior of Harry's. Perhaps he can begin to build some trust between them?

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