Title: Fighting
| 19 Apr 2011 2:07 am
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Reviewer: wandlorean (Anonymous)
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Very lovely and painful way to end this chapter. Painful because I'm on edge now, anxiously waiting to find out how Snape reacts to Harry's facade crumbling.
May I say, I absolutely love your Harry? He's much more clever, jaded, and cynical than canon Harry (completely understandable,look at what he's suffered through in your fic). There's a vulnerability inside him, somewhere deep down, but he remains quite hardened on the outside. I really enjoy your portrayal of him and am very much looking forward to the next chapter.
By the way, the part where Snape reaches out and touches Harry's hand, the very hand that is missing several fingers, just cut me to the bone. Such a small thing, yet so meaningful and poignant. Amazing storytelling here.
Author's Response: Geez, now you're making me sniffle.
Thanks. :) More to come in the near future. Snape will be learning more of why Harry is having such a violent reaction NOW . . .