Title: Betrayal
| 09 Apr 2013 3:39 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh that last part was dreadful even for them
Title: A Slight Upset
| 09 Apr 2013 12:14 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very powerful chapter well handled, thank you
Title: Betrayal
| 05 Apr 2013 7:45 pm
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Reviewer: Mojojojo (Anonymous)
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Oh. My. God. I love this story! What a cruel cliffie :O it was brilliant though :D Please continue this! :'( I beg you!
So, who killed the Dursley's? Not that they didn't deserve it, but I'm guessing it was someone with darkness in them for the house to be tainted with Black Magic. Kudos on the new chapter.
Who killed the Dursleys? Was it Snape or Moody?
And why doesn't Dumbles realize the muggles are dead yet?
Author's Response: re: Dumbles - Oh, he knows.
Title: Betrayal
| 30 Mar 2013 9:45 am
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Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Really like your story, loved the fact that Harry got new clothes and in Slytherin with Severus watching out for him. I am so happy the Dursleys got theirs, I know this is going to sound terrible, and I'm sorry, but I really hate how they were to harry and deserved what they got. (I said it was a terrible thing to say). Can't wait to read more.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHERE IS IT? WHERE IS THE REST? I NEED IT! I NEED IT!!!!
usually read on fanfiction but fan fic been being a pain sending me updates so can't wait to read more
Well we know that Harry has some big bang powers and he needs to learn to control his emotions a little better when he gets upset. Are you going to have them tell Remus about whats wrong with him? Are you going to get Minerva to lighten up or is she going to retire or get fired. The way she is acting I wouldn't mind it.
Aww what a sweet ending how will Harry take it. The part with Moody hitting on Severus was halarious. But, I am sure he is very in shape under them robes :P
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