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Reviews For Back in Time
This chapter was great. I loved seeing where everyone ended up. I think my favorite overall character development throughout the fic was seeing Adverbs go from a man who hated kids to having more children than Pongo and Pereira had puppies in 101 Dalmatians. Very nice. What a journey! Thanks for sharing your writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your lovely reviews! I am very pleased that you enjoyed my story.
Author's Response: I am delighted my story was so lovely for you. Thankfully I re-wrote that epilogue and got Ron in there... he was almost forgotten.
I love the way you did not just go through a year of Hogwarts, and that is it. You went through two years (was it two?) complete with Summers and trips abroad and everything.You give your readers a lot to look forward to until the very end. I love the name "Eowyn" by the way. I may use her name and Elydree's name for my daughters. Who knows, may name my son Severus. lol I love love loveeeee Lyrica! God i'm so jealous of Harry, Draco, Elly, Eowyn, Gwenny and prankster (I forgot her name). I wish for the life these kids have in your story. Everything ended to beautifully and happy. I will be reading this story over and over again lol. I just love it!!!!
1. The way they ended up in 1898. Most time travel things are either broken Time-Turners, or aren't explained at all. Your explanation for the accident and the ultimate solution were ingenious, sensible, and great plot points! 2. A romantic interest for Snape that is anything but a Mary Sue. Lyrica was awesome! I loved most that she was flawed. So many OFCs seem to be too perfect, but Lyrica felt real. 3. King Henry's ghost. I love the idea of him using being a ghost as a way to fulfill his boyhood dream about being a musician instead of a ruler. You gave him a great personality, and I very much enjoyed his teaching Ron the lute. 4. Your interpretation of Ron Weasley. This was one of the very best characterizations I've read of him yet. He's not a cardboard cut-out sidekick at all. The initial squabbling with Draco was right out of canon, but as the relationship grew and changed, you made Ron into a much more mature and thoughtful, but still loyal and fun, person. 5. Draco's history with his father. It was horrible what Lucius did to him, but it made the canon Draco make a lot more sense. I loved that bit where he admitted that he'd almost been sorted into Gryffindor! 6. Bluebell Fire land mines! What a clever idea! All of the magic in the story was great. I truly admire your efforts to make the Ley Line magic work with the canon style magic to to wipe out Voldemort; so that he could] become the "Power that he knows not". 7. The description of Severus coming out of the birthing room holding Eowyn in his arms. That was so beautiful and I could just picture it in my head. It is a more vivid image even than his and Lyrica's handfasting! 8.... Gosh, if I keep this up, I'll be describing the whole tale back to you. Thank you so very much for such an absorbing, lovely story. If this is your vry first HP fanfic, I can hardly wait to read the rest of your pieces! Well done!. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I rather enjoyed re-reading this as I posted it here. I am pleased it gave you so much joy. Happy birthday to you, as well. I hope it is a perfect one!
Anyway, I love this story. Great job. I would love to see more stories in this universe. Maybe the weddings, the kids... One-shots would be cool. Or a story abouth the new generation you created. I would even go to FanFiction.net to read it if there wasn't enough of Sev and Harry to post here. Please consider it. Again, love you story! Happy writing and best wishes. :) Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you are getting some sleep now after 3 days of reading! ;-) I may consider going back, but I can't say for certain. I have a soft spot for Snape's daughter who is attending Hogwarts. She sort of took hold of me in that epilogue.
Author's Response: I am honored that my story kept you so captivated. Thank you for your kind words. |
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