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Title: Epilogue 05 Jul 2023 1:19 pm
Reviewer: OutriderIvyHill (Signed) [Report This]
    The Snape's have taken over Hogwarts! I'm very glad to see Death by Snape make a comeback.

    This chapter was great. I loved seeing where everyone ended up. I think my favorite overall character development throughout the fic was seeing Adverbs go from a man who hated kids to having more children than Pongo and Pereira had puppies in 101 Dalmatians. Very nice.

    What a journey! Thanks for sharing your writing.
Title: Epilogue 14 Mar 2022 4:41 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Your story was a magnificent journey! Thanks so much for sharing it.
Title: Epilogue 11 Sep 2017 2:02 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed reading this lovely story, and love the happy ending. Excellent work.
Title: Epilogue 19 Oct 2016 8:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for a wonderful story it has been a pleasure and joy to read it

    Author's Response: Thank you for all of your lovely reviews! I am very pleased that you enjoyed my story.
Title: Epilogue 07 Sep 2013 7:17 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi there! Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to your wonderful story, especially since I had only the final two chapters left to read! I got sidetracked so many times, I think I'm on a totally different real-life railroad by now! Anyway, I always want to save reading this story for moments when I can take my time to appreciate all of the magnificent detail you've included, because that's what makes your writing so special. I truly love your sense of imagination, originality, and sense of humor-- believe me, I've burst out laughing on many occasions throughout this story! Loved the epilogue, where we get a glimpse into the futures of all the characters/relationships we've followed, and YAY for Eowyn getting Sorted where she wanted! And she's got SISTERS! (I'd wondered if the baby would be the one-&-only for Severus & Lyrica.) And Ron is ... Well, the VERY best of luck with his growing family! I can't praise you enough for a wonderful adventure-- many many thanks! :-)

    Author's Response: I am delighted my story was so lovely for you. Thankfully I re-wrote that epilogue and got Ron in there... he was almost forgotten.
Title: Epilogue 18 May 2011 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    The closer I got to finishing this story, the more sad I became. I loved this story so much. This is absolutely one of the best fanfics i've every read, and not only because you managed to tell a tale about time travel that was well written, but because everything in your story connected well and made sense.
    I love the way you did not just go through a year of Hogwarts, and that is it. You went through two years (was it two?) complete with Summers and trips abroad and everything.You give your readers a lot to look forward to until the very end.
    I love the name "Eowyn" by the way. I may use her name and Elydree's name for my daughters. Who knows, may name my son Severus. lol
    I love love loveeeee Lyrica! God i'm so jealous of Harry, Draco, Elly, Eowyn, Gwenny and prankster (I forgot her name). I wish for the life these kids have in your story. Everything ended to beautifully and happy. I will be reading this story over and over again lol. I just love it!!!!
Title: Epilogue 06 Apr 2011 12:20 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a most magnificent story! I don't think I can articulate everything that I adore about it, but I'll tell you a few of the things that kept me clicking chapter and after chapter until I got finished today (on my birthday!).

    1. The way they ended up in 1898. Most time travel things are either broken Time-Turners, or aren't explained at all. Your explanation for the accident and the ultimate solution were ingenious, sensible, and great plot points!

    2. A romantic interest for Snape that is anything but a Mary Sue. Lyrica was awesome! I loved most that she was flawed. So many OFCs seem to be too perfect, but Lyrica felt real.

    3. King Henry's ghost. I love the idea of him using being a ghost as a way to fulfill his boyhood dream about being a musician instead of a ruler. You gave him a great personality, and I very much enjoyed his teaching Ron the lute.

    4. Your interpretation of Ron Weasley. This was one of the very best characterizations I've read of him yet. He's not a cardboard cut-out sidekick at all. The initial squabbling with Draco was right out of canon, but as the relationship grew and changed, you made Ron into a much more mature and thoughtful, but still loyal and fun, person.

    5. Draco's history with his father. It was horrible what Lucius did to him, but it made the canon Draco make a lot more sense. I loved that bit where he admitted that he'd almost been sorted into Gryffindor!

    6. Bluebell Fire land mines! What a clever idea! All of the magic in the story was great. I truly admire your efforts to make the Ley Line magic work with the canon style magic to to wipe out Voldemort; so that he could]
    become the "Power that he knows not".

    7. The description of Severus coming out of the birthing room holding Eowyn in his arms. That was so beautiful and I could just picture it in my head. It is a more vivid image even than his and Lyrica's handfasting!

    8.... Gosh, if I keep this up, I'll be describing the whole tale back to you.

    Thank you so very much for such an absorbing, lovely story. If this is your vry first HP fanfic, I can hardly wait to read the rest of your pieces!

    Well done!.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I rather enjoyed re-reading this as I posted it here.  I am pleased it gave you so much joy.  Happy birthday to you, as well.  I hope it is a perfect one!
Title: Epilogue 04 Apr 2011 11:42 pm
Reviewer: EmmalynnLilliannaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. There are so many things I'd like to say about this story, but they're all so jumbled up in my head that all I can say is: "Wow, fantastic, terrific, amazing, and wonderful". This story kept me at the computer for three days straight, just trying to read it all. I was completely captivated ny the entire plot and the depth of the characters and the new take on particularly Harry, Sev and Draco when they were taken out of the setting where they needed to present a certain front... If you know what I'm trying to say....

    Anyway, I love this story. Great job. I would love to see more stories in this universe. Maybe the weddings, the kids... One-shots would be cool. Or a story abouth the new generation you created. I would even go to FanFiction.net to read it if there wasn't enough of Sev and Harry to post here. Please consider it.
    Again, love you story! Happy writing and best wishes. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I hope you are getting some sleep now after 3 days of reading! ;-)  I may consider going back, but I can't say for certain.  I have a soft spot for Snape's daughter who is attending Hogwarts.  She sort of took hold of me in that epilogue.
Title: Epilogue 01 Apr 2011 8:46 am
Reviewer: HalfBloodPrincesa (Signed) [Report This]
    I usually don't read time travel stories because they get so bogged down, and very often they follow a set, predictable pattern. That being said, I am really glad that I devoted the time to read this. It was anything but predictable. I love how you thought up an unknown headmistress that disappeared, and then to find out the reason she disappeared was because she time traveled with Snape and company. You made everything believable, even the non canon couples. I would really love for you to write more in this universe, especially about the courtships, weddings, and children that resulted between chapters 90 and 91.

    Author's Response: I am honored that my story kept you so captivated.  Thank you for your kind words.

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