I really appreciate that you moved through the torture and rescue quickly, and instead focused on the aftermath. Thanks so much for that.
That was a brilliant and unexpected twist.
I always enjoy scenes of Snape being able to harvest the Basilisk. It, alone, could fund the whole war effort. I loved the chapter end as well.
I like the integration of ley line magic, and am continually soothed by Lyrica’s presence. She’s an amazing character. I also like all the various cross-House pairings that are happening. Thanks for another fantastic chapter.
This was an amazingly long and action-filled chapter. I like the role Lyrica played in bringing about a fragile detente between Severus and Sirius. The shopping scene was fun and the conversations between the kids was especially enjoyable. Your Christmas scene was so tastefully done, and the scene at the end was gripping.
I really appreciate how Pansy was set up to learn her lesson and even grow from it. Really nicely done. I’m looking forward to seeing how their time at Grimmauld Place goes!
I loved it all. Every last bit.
Thanks for the awesomely long and packed chapter. I enjoyed your telling of Snape’s memories.
This was an amazingly rich and powerful emotional ride that I could feel down to my toes. Thank you.
I really wish they hadn’t learned of Lyrica’s deception, but I suppose it was only a matter of time. Harry’s trust in Severus is touching.
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