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Title: Changing Fate 05 Apr 2011 2:47 am
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    This is awesome! I love how Sev's beginning to warm up already. Lupin should have called him a mother hen :) haha
    Really, fantastic job! Harry is so cute! I just can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. And yeah, Sevvie just needed a chance to have someone to care for, and Remus knew that. :P
Title: Changing Fate 05 Apr 2011 1:05 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good night mr. tom!! one of my favorites too.

    Author's Response: It is indeed Goodnight Mr Tom! :)
Title: Changing Fate 04 Apr 2011 9:15 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for sharing your story with us.

    Thank goodness Remus decided to read the letter from Lily.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. :) And yeah, I needed something to fix the injustice I felt at Remus not contacting Harry at all while he was growing up, and then how he just slipped back into the shadows once Sirius was around. If he had I was sure things would have turned out very differently.
Title: Changing Fate 04 Apr 2011 9:08 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I like!!! I'd love to see you continue it, but at the same time it does seem sort of complete, too. Maybe a sequel, showing what happens when he goes to Hogwarts, and maybe what happens to Lupin?

    Author's Response: I will in fact be doing a sequel. It's going to be snapshots of these three boys' lives until a certain point. What that point is I am unsure of yet. I might do it until Harry gets his Hogwarts letter, and then either leave it there or write seperate stories for each school year, or I might just continue the snapshots up until Harry is out of school. Still trying to figure it out. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Title: Changing Fate 04 Apr 2011 9:01 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is excellant!

    i have no idea what that line is from, but if i were to hazard a guess, it would be the story 'goodnight moon'

    Author's Response: Thanks I appreciate the review! :)
Title: Changing Fate 04 Apr 2011 5:07 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    it's of course goodnight moon. haha. is that why your penname is moon? ;) Anyway awesome story! I wish you continued were continuing it. It was wonderful! thanks. :)

    Author's Response: I will be writing a sequel consisting of snapshots of their lives until a certain point. I'm unsure at what age I want to stop. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Changing Fate 04 Apr 2011 3:38 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    I see the end line as perhaps an ode to Good Night Mr. Moon

    I loved this story Loved remus being the one that brought them together

    Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. It took me a while to get it to the point where I was happy to post it, so I'm glad when it is appreciated, and appreciate the time people take to review. :)
Title: Changing Fate 04 Apr 2011 9:22 am
Reviewer: Smiley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Goodnight Mr Tom? About a kid in WWII Britain who lives with his abusive mum and gets sent away to the country, eventually getting adopted by "Mr Tom"

    Really cute, I like how it was Remus who found Harry, and without prompting from anyone else, I also like how he thinks highly enough and trusts Severus enough to leave Harry with him - he doesn't let childhood grudges blind him... unlike someone else *cough* Sirius *cough*

    Author's Response: Yes indeed it is Goodnight Mr Tom! About another abused British boy who lives under the stairs. Kudos! There was at least one other reference in my story that I couldn't help putting in there, and probably more will follow, but you can't deny there are some similarities. And I'm glad you liked my story, and thanks for taking the time to review, which is a habit I woefully lack in.
Title: Changing Fate 04 Apr 2011 8:23 am
Reviewer: kkj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed reading this story and liked how Remus was the one to bring Harry to Severus. Nice work.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you did, as it justifies the bunny who wouldn't leave me alone. Sometimes it just pays to listen to them. :P
Title: Changing Fate 04 Apr 2011 8:03 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! I'm so glad little Harry has a real family now. Severus too, and Remus. They all need each other.

    I think the book is "Good Night, Mr. Tom." I liked that one, too.

    Author's Response: Thanks! And that is a Kudos. :) I'm glad you liked my story! Especially since I've greatly enjoyed reading your stories, even though I'm absolutely horrible at reviewing for whatever reason, but I've been keeping close track of especially your Slave Child. Thanks again!

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