| Title: A Not-So-Cheerful Birthday
| 16 Feb 2012 6:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I liked severus' thoughts and is use of legilmency very clever.I am looking forward t Aunt Marg and Ripper arriving!
Okay, I teared up. Five-year-old Harry really really got to me here. It is an often-done scene, but you wrote it with a simplicity and directness that actually got to my heart.
Really liking this story. Looking forward to an update!
Wow....Severus certainly is learning
that there's more to young Harry
than he ever thought there was! He
is also being confronted by his own
preconceptions about the boy & why
he behaves the way he does in some situations...which certainly is
a bitter pill for Severus to swallow!
Though I can't help wondering if Severus will be able to remain in feline form until they both return to
Hogwarts....or if the dreaded arrival
of Aunt Marge will drive both of tthem to leave privet drive? Also
will Severus allow Albus to actually send Harry to his relatives again or
to even remain in there custody
after the events of this holiday?
Awww.... both sad and sweet at the same time.
So moments between these two? Perhaps Sev protecting Harry from Ripper? Or noticing the big black dog? Severus actually cuddling up to Harry when something horrible happens?
I love this story! :) Great writing. I like the how we can read Snape's thoughts, too. :)
ah, i was hoping you'd update soon! another wonderful chapter!
I'm really enjoying this so far please update again soon, I look forward to reading more!
| Title: A Not-So-Cheerful Birthday
| 14 Feb 2012 7:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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awww beautiful I am glad that Severus got to see just how Harry celebrates his birthday i do indeed think Severus is haveing a change for the better
Love the chapter. Awesome. The memory nearly made me cry...
| Title: A Not-So-Cheerful Birthday
| 14 Feb 2012 4:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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I loved this chapter, especially the flashbacks! The birthday scene with little Harry was heartbreaking. And poor Sev... if Lily had only kept her promise, as he kept his.
As for moments I'd like to see, perhaps Harry could get sick, and Sev do his best to help him? I'd also love to see Ripper scared to death (well, not literally) of cat-Snape ;).
Lovely story, thank you for writing!
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