Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 22 29 Mar 2022 12:58 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The visit with Gilderoy playing mother was hilarious. I loved Severus’s parting shot to the WCS representative.
Title: Chapter 22 12 Jul 2011 2:12 am
Reviewer: Maigen1266 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the nod to Doctor Who...Or I hope it was an intentional nod...if not I'll feel like an idiot...But Stewart Lethbridge? Sounds a bit like General Lethbridge-Stewart
Title: Chapter 22 09 Apr 2011 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely tale! Congratulations on your accomplishment of writing yet another sequel that is just as good, if not better than the original story of the series!

    I was so worried that Lucius would end up in Azkaban! I was so glad that the return of the memories provided the proof needed that the Ministry just put him on parole. His daughter, Sophie, is adorable, and it was so nice to see how all of the different characters responded to Lucius' return. I'm glad that he, like Severus, was able to find a life of peace in the end.

    Tabitha coming into the Snapes' lives was an interesting twist. I was horrified by what Dobby discovered, and saddened that Dobby had to take the burden of justice on his own soul to deal with Gipple's total abnegation of what a House Elf's responsibilities towards its bound family.

    Wizarding Family Services drove me nuts. Too many memories of dealing with them back when my own handicapped son needed therapies and the county authorities controlled that.

    Severus makes an awesome family man, and I still like Echo very much!

    Speaking of Echo, I'm so very glad that she and Niko survived the placental abruption. Harry's initial reaction to his brother was great, but his reaction to nappies was even better! LOL!

    Between Harry and Severus, and all of your OCs and interpretations of other canon characters, you have drawn me into the Wizarding World even more thoroughly than JKR did. Thank you for many hours of reading pleasure!

    Well done!

    Author's Response: You're so very welcome!  I have a few more chapters to post, and then the story will be truly ended.  I am very pleased that you enjoy Echo.  I had fun creating her for Severus.  :)

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