I love Harry’s surprise for Severus! I hope Lucius is ok in the end! Thanks for the great chapter.
I feel bad for Harry, but admire the parallels you drew between Harry’s experience and what Severus dealt with under the Marauders. I’m so glad that Severus really listened to Harry at the end. I only hope his conversation with Molly changes things.
Amazingly touching scene. I hope Lucius stays the father he wants to be, or hopefully just leaves his memories in the past where they belong.
What a beautiful way for Harry to fall asleep in Lucius’s lap. I really like this new Lucius, and hope the old memories don’t change him too much.
What a totally different Lucius this is! It was hilarious picturing him in jeans and cowboy boots!
Draco’s conflicting feelings about his father come through so well. I’m curious about the note and how much of the man Severus once knew is still left.
Interesting plot twist! You’re so creative, and you’re a great writer.
| Title: Chapter 1 - The Gathering of Spirits
| 28 Mar 2022 2:30 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I’m so happy to be reading this last installment in your amazing series. This chapter was absolutely, well...magical! Truly enchanting magic in its most natural form, and such a lovely way for Severus to pass it on to Harry.
Loved it! Adored it! Wish there was more. Thank you so much for such a wonderful story I fell in love with by reading the first chapter. ;)
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