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Reviews For In The Heat Of The Moment
Wondering how Severus is going to stay out of Azkaban. Just one question (because I'm a little obsessive compulsive about these details)It's not clear how long the seizure is; is it one long seizure or several short ones? I wanted to reach in and start assisting the child's breathing myself--a compliment to the amount of tension you built up in the scene. Anyway, I enjoyed it.
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