Omg! This is very scary. I hope that Snape and Harry can get out of this in one piece.
Great story.
Author's Response: Scary eh? I didn't think it was all that scary, but then again, I suppose nothing does come as a surprise for me because well ... I'm writing it! ;) Thanks for the review!
Oh, very cool that 'Crazy Old Ellery' brought them to help!!
Author's Response: Yeah, he is a little bit wacky, that's for sure! Thanks for reviewing.
Whoo!! Great reveal! I love it! I wonder what Snape and Harry are going to do. Stay and help? I suppose they have to if they need to get back home. Very intriguing story line! I wish that there were more descriptions though, of the original characters and the cave they are in. I feel like I know some things, but not really what everything looks like. I loved how Harry eavesdropped and then got caught. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I will try to put in more description. I guess I've been getting a little carried away with all the other details.
Ooooo...nice twist! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you did well on your tests :D
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review and well wishes!
| Title: The Invention
| 23 Apr 2011 8:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Very interesting chapter, I'm looking forward the next one =o)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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