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Title: The Lantern Faux Pas 22 Jun 2011 4:36 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, yes. Very scary.


    Poor Harry. He's really got to learn to listen.

    Author's Response: Yes, got his ears full of cotton that one.
Title: The Lantern Faux Pas 29 Apr 2011 3:11 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, but I think Harry should accuse him of being a wizard.

    Author's Response: That would be interesting, but who would believe an eleven year old kid like Harry? I mean,  both he and Snape stick out like a sore thumbs, as they aren't from the time. Anyways, thank you for the review!
Title: The Lantern Faux Pas 28 Apr 2011 7:17 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! Of course Harry wandered off, left the cave and got caught! Maybe he'll learn his lesson after this? I wonder if McTavish sent the flying creature as a lure to trick the children out of the cave. If so, harry certainly fell for it. I hope that Snape is on his way! But after Harry is rescued, if he is rescued, Harry is going to be in soo much trouble.

    Great story! I love how original it is. Nice job with Harry's thoughts, and the actions and intentions of the characters. The details of McTavish were good - I could picture him.

    Thanks for the update! Please update when you can!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the lengthy review! Snape will not be Happy with Harry, that is for sure.

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