Omg. This is a very exciting and scary story.
Well done. Onto to the next chappie. I hope that Harry and Snape can get out of this scrape.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it Pandora!
| Title: Of Looming Darkness
| 27 May 2011 3:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Hobbit (Anonymous)
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Tense. I love Snape's reaction to Harry crying out - so angry and protective, and you've managed to convey that it about two sentences. Good going =)
Author's Response: I was pretty happy with it too! Thank you for reviewing!
I love it. If I were Harry or Snape I would ask the judge to clean the pin with the same wet cloth and then prick McTavish or any other member of the court or person in the room, and then they would see that McTavish is the wizard and he's using it against anyone who he doesn't like. Or at least that's what Snape or Harry could say.
Author's Response: Yeah, that is smart, but unfortunately McTavish split them up to make it so much harder for them. Not ot mention, who would believe a bunch of "witches"? Clever idea!
| Title: Of Looming Darkness
| 13 May 2011 2:13 am
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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That was cruel... massive clift hanger and a two week wait. CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!! How are harry and smape gonna get out of this one????
Author's Response: Yeah, I know, and I do feel bad about that but I didn't get a chance to either make the chapter longer or follow up with it quickly, as I have so little spare time. Sorry to make you wait so long, but perhaps it will make it better when you finally get to read it. :) Thank you for the review!
Dang! Major cliffie!! Can't wait to see how Severus gets them out of THIS!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
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