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Title: Drawing the Blueprints 12 Sep 2016 5:29 pm
Reviewer: etherian (Signed) [Report This]
    Usually I review at the end but I just wanted to mention that I am rather on pins and needles here.

    Author's Response: Hi etherian! Thanks so much for leaving a review! I do still read new ones despite not actively adding stories to the site these days. It always makes my day to hear from new readers! - Cheers, Whitetail.
Title: Drawing the Blueprints 23 Jul 2011 7:04 am
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, lovely - Snape's softer side is beginning to get noticed - I always knew he had it in him :p He did well with the tense situation, with Evelyn in shock and little Maggie needing some tender care. Aw...
    So, the reality is pretty horrific, and they're beginning to make plans to pull off a mass rescue, I hope they can pull it off - it does seem rather fantastic that they might be able to achieve it - perhaps some Felix Felicsis (I'm sure I haven't spelt that right) might come in handy...
    I have wondered why McTavish hasn't become a target himself so far though - I mean, if I and my fellows were being summarily hunted and the main instigator was at first a hypocrit and a little mad, then I'd be taking that son of a *** out pretty soon. Surely a whole bunch of Witches and Wizards could take down one Wizard with a few Muggles - no? Then the problem would fizzle... or at least be manageable with only Muggle bigots to contend with. These people have got to learn to work together better! With his background this (admittedly more sordid) solution should have been more apparent to Snape much earlier than this - c'mon Sev, if there's any time to embrace the dark side of you it would be NOW - no time for softening, really. :p
    On to more...
    misundersnape...

    Author's Response: Gosh that last line made me laugh ... Yes, for once Snape should embrace his dark side. Though it really looks bad to murder someone in front of a student! ;) It seems fairly straighforward for the magical community too, but keep in mind that these people are terrified to confront him not only because he is so dangerous but because they know that if they are caught even just by the muggles and have their wand taken away things could go downhill quickly. Usually that is not a problem and rescue would be easy, but thanks to all of the enchantments in the area placed by McTavish it would be a lot harder to rescue people. There are a few good archers in the town too ... Anyways. Yes, it would have been much easier to let the magical community smite McTavish right away, but where's the story in that? This is sooo much more fun! Thanks so much for the long review, and your points are wonderfully refreshing and really picked my brain. So thank you for that as well! :)
Title: Drawing the Blueprints 08 Jul 2011 11:20 pm
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for this awesome story, Whitetail. A great action and great relationship between Harry and Severus forming. I am looking forward to seeing next chapter!

    Author's Response: You're welcome Victoire. And thank you, as I really wouldn't be posting any writing on this site if it weren't for the readers! ;) Glad you like it!
Title: Drawing the Blueprints 08 Jul 2011 9:46 pm
Reviewer: i am (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it

    Author's Response: Glad to hear!
Title: Drawing the Blueprints 08 Jul 2011 7:19 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Snape is actually becoming human. He's starting to get a soft side towards kids.


    Very cute chapter, but with a serious touch too. I'm hoping that their mission is successful.

    Good job as usual.

    Author's Response: Thanks Pandora! I was a little worried about this one, so glad you liked it! Then again, I worry too much. ;)

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