| Title: Threats and Accusations
| 08 Aug 2015 8:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
I loved the way Severus threatened them. :)
| Title: Threats and Accusations
| 04 May 2011 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Threats and Accusations
| 03 May 2011 5:53 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd@gmail.com (Anonymous)
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Good story. Well written. Entertaining confrontation between Snape and the Dursleys.
| Title: Threats and Accusations
| 02 May 2011 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awww, cute beginning. Severus sounded very dictatorial when he told the Dursleys how they would be treating Harry. I am surprised that he was able to go on and on about it, and I wonder if Petunia will be able to find a way to make Harry's life miserable anyway. Or if she will still try. There is still the matter of Dudley. I worry that Dudley is going to wake up and make a scene before Snape and Harry are off.
Great idea and good job with the story beginning! Your Snape is very in character- everyone is. Thanks for sharing this story with us!
| Title: Threats and Accusations
| 01 May 2011 8:44 am
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| Reviewer: Slythering Potter (Anonymous)
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This story is very well done. I love your style and can read the story quickly and easily, while still appreciating the literate architecture of it. I particularly like how, when scenes that are the same as the book - Harry on the floor waiting, you do not take from the story but rather reword it and add your own flavor to it.
One point. Snape seemed a tad nicer to Harry than I would have expected. Granted, this is only the beginning, and they haven't had a lot of interaction yet - but, for someone who "hates" him so furiously in the book he seemed to warm up just a hair too quickly. (Then again, he wasn't nice per-say, but I think you get my drift)
Overall, fantastic story! I hope to read more. Are you going to continue on into his Hogwarts career? If so, how far are you planning to go?
--Alis Syn
Loved it. Please update soon.
| Title: Threats and Accusations
| 30 Apr 2011 11:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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I always love these stories where a tiny initial difference leads to a big change. I do think that Snape and Harry got off to such a bad start, and I always wondered what would happen if they hadn't
i CAN TELL i'M GOING TO LOVE THIS STORY. I HOPE HARRY GETS SORTED INTO SLYTHERIN! cAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
Oh my! I would definitely not want to take a chance of irritating a certain potions master.
Very well done.
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