I’m looking forward to seeing how Snape fares against Ron! I always love remembrances of Shell Cottage.
| Title: Oct. 12 - 17, 1996
| 11 Jun 2011 2:34 pm
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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I so enjoy the mentoring, and caring, that Snape is giving Harry. Every time you mention the clock it gives me a warm glow!! I am glad, too, that you are finally giving Severus a worthy chess challenger - Harry has many sterling qualities, but chess is not where he shines. I always thought that JKR dropped the ball a bit with the chess substory - it was a useful device for the first book, but I imagined many ways she could have utilized Ron's skill with chess and the calculations needed to be a good player as she continued the series.
I so enjoy the relationship you are building between Harry and Severus in this story. I also am impressed on how you can keep so much of the action and structure of HBP while making such a fundamental change to one of the central relationships in it!
This story is way more ahead on ff.net! We're on something like chapter 25! Fans of this fic might want to check there! :) x
| Title: Oct. 12 - 17, 1996
| 25 May 2011 11:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter I love their chess game and the little tit bits about Lily which of course give us more about Severus!
This is one of the loveliest Harry-Severus mentor-guardian fics I have ever read. I love seeing the continuing development of their bond through their correspondence.
You are a wonderfully talented writer. HAve you ever thought of writing your own original fiction? IF you do, I would certainly enjoy reading it.
| Title: Oct. 12 - 17, 1996
| 23 May 2011 6:56 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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More, more! I've become as adddicted to this as I did Moment of Impact! Kudos!
| Title: Oct. 12 - 17, 1996
| 23 May 2011 5:19 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Sweet chapter! I loved how Ron reacts to the chess set and of course all the interactions between Sev and Harry.
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