| Title: February 18 – February 20, 1997
| 18 Oct 2022 12:51 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That has got to be the worst detention I’ve ever read about! The imagery conjured through your stories is unparalleled in its humor and creativity.
| Title: February 18 – February 20, 1997
| 09 Aug 2011 12:33 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely you re so inventive especially with their questions to each other thnk you
| Title: February 18 – February 20, 1997
| 06 Aug 2011 11:55 pm
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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teehee, wonderful as always! i am impressed by the speed and quality of your updates, keep up the excellent work!
| Title: February 18 – February 20, 1997
| 06 Aug 2011 5:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Xedra (Signed)
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hahahahaha this was a certainly interesting chapter it was funny to read :D lol nyways plz update soon!
I absolutely LOVED Moment of Impact, and I must say this sequel doesn't disappoint! Your writing style is such a joy to read, and the way you alternate the regular with the epistles shows Harry and Snape's voices really well. And I love your whirlwind chapters! :D
Your use of symbolism and imagery is excellent, and I love all the questions Harry and Snape ask each other in their letters - what a great way to learn more about each other! I love how you're developing Harry and Snape's bond, from reconciliation to mentor to parent, and it's just so beautiful and touching. The Animagus chapters were exquisite. Your blending of HBP canon with the added Harry-Severus bond is ingenious and so well executed it's becoming my personal head canon, and I love how you alternate serious events with humor, like Ron beating Severus in chess but then Severus became hula hoop king - that one had me laughing for ages! :D
This chapter with the hog castration was hilarious! Not something you'd see everyday but definitely a creative and most enlightening detention! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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