Very well done ^_^
Feel free to write somme more in this universe ;-)
Thank you
I loved the story - so well-written!
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| 23 Apr 2011 6:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Sabrina Puckett (Anonymous)
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Wonderful,absolutley wonderful!!
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| 23 Apr 2011 10:47 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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LOL!! Very good! Very Good indeed...
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| 18 Apr 2011 4:53 am
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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*smile* Loved it. Could you please write more? Though Severus should have been more mature, one can hardly blame him for reacting badly, in canon, to what he perceived as a smart-@ss 11 year old. As a teacher myself, that kind of smarting back to me in the first class would have gotten under my skin too. But in your story, so many differences could result from a small change in the beginning. A sweet, short story that needs following up on.
I loved it. I especially liked the part where Snape was thinking back on when Lily won the potions award and blew him a kiss when she saw him in the crowd. I can just see the look on young Severus' face! Thank you. ;)
That put a smile on my face. :)
Good story.
Excellent story! I especially loved the ending.
I like this very much, too bad it isn't a longer story! I'm glad Snape eventually saw more than his enemy's son in Harry.
Thanks for writing!
Sita
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