| Title: Chapter 4
| 19 Aug 2014 5:06 am
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| Reviewer: Jtz (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 4
| 02 Jun 2014 6:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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This was so sad! Very well written thank you
Oh poor Harry! I loved the little moments between him and Snape though.
I'm really enjoying your tale. Thanks for sharing it with us.
I love it! Great chapter! Poor harry. you capture so well how Harry is. Wonderful job with him. I like your Snape too. It's so cute how attached Harry is to Snape.
ahh i love this chapter, i thought harry was going to leave with severus, i guess not, but i enjoy the last chapters the best. update soon, cant wait!
| Title: Chapter 4
| 02 May 2011 2:20 am
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| Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous)
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Too sweet! Thanks for writing this. :)
Update soon. Looking forward to more.
I find it very believable that Harry wouldn't want to be "taken away" from the place where he lived all his life, even if his relatives don't treat him very well. As a child, he'd still be attached to them and want their approval. You captured that very well.
I also like your Snape and his understated disapproval of the situation. I hope he can find a way to keep in touch with Harry, and maybe see him again.
Great chapter, thanks for updating so quickly!
I love how you've written Harry. I find him very believable, what with his troubled thoughts regarding how his aunt and uncle feel about him. I liked how you said that his stomach hurt when his aunt said they never wanted him, as for a child a pain like that would feel much like a stomach ache, or at least I recall rejection as feeling so at that age. It was overall a very good chapter, and I look forward to the next! :)
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