| Title: Chapter 6
| 19 Aug 2014 5:34 am
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| Reviewer: Jtz (Signed)
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Still a lot tension between the two but getting better
| Title: Chapter 6
| 08 May 2011 12:30 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a great chapter
I like!! I really like how you don't have Snape going soft too quickly. Like, he's clearly a good enough person to be angry about Harry's treatment, but he is still kinda mean and clearly doesn't like kids. :0)
| Title: Chapter 6
| 07 May 2011 11:26 am
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| Reviewer: Kari (Anonymous)
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You do a great job with the words each character speaks, with their gestures and actions. I really like your writing style!
Good chapter. I thought you did Snape pretty well, and I think it would take Harry mentioning something of his previous treatment for Snape to snap out of his rather harsh demeanor and remember Harry is only a child.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 07 May 2011 8:03 am
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| Reviewer: reader1writer1 (Anonymous)
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That was good. I hope that Snape loosens up a bit, but he is who he is, huh?
I love it! I am really enjoying your story!
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