Oh, HILARIOUS! I adored Dumbledore's letter to Harry! Perfect!!!
I'm enjoying this story so far, so please don't take the following recommendation negatively: watch out for malapropisms in Severus' notes to Harry, as they make him look foolish for correcting Harry when he's making similar mistakes in diction, spelling, etc.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 08 Jul 2011 8:13 am
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| Reviewer: Kore (Anonymous)
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That was an absolutely lovely story. I enjoyed the evolution of Snape's character, and how you lead us through what it must have been like to be little, unwanted Harry. Brava
| Title: Chapter 10
| 03 Jun 2011 10:43 am
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| Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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a really well done story, very well done it defenitly hit my emotional ques to cry both in delight and in sadness thinking Is Severus really just going to leave that poor boy there with those awful people?
| Title: Chapter 10
| 25 May 2011 5:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (rhysylle@gmail.com) (Anonymous)
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I read this story while on break at work, and I just had to tell you how much I loved it. Snape was utterly in character, Harry was charming and adorable, and there were moments that made me smile, and others that brought me to the brink of tears.
My favorite parts were when Harry and Severus were riding the Hogwart's Express, and Harry was talking about being up in the tree and thinking. His last line about wanting to remember everything about Snape was just perfect--and one of the moments I almost started to cry. My other favorite part was the very end.
"Yes, this is what it feels like."
Oh, I'm feeling so good and warm inside because of how you finished the story.
Don't let people pressure you into a sequel unless you really decide that you want to explore beyond this tale. It stands marvelously on its own, and carrying it immediately forward would, I think, diminish its power.
This is going on my "to re-read" list and I'm reccing it to my sister, who also loves gen fics about Snape and young Harry.
Well done!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 23 May 2011 12:02 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely ending thank you so much and good luck with your writing
| Title: Chapter 10
| 22 May 2011 3:00 pm
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| Reviewer: jyllian (Anonymous)
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Um...actually i didnt like it so much as the previous ones...the plot was too rushed...it felt like u were getting tired of writing or ran out of things to write so u ended the story quickly as possible...jus my view
| Title: Chapter 10
| 20 May 2011 11:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Kari (Anonymous)
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You did a great job! I'm enchanted. Thank you :)
| Title: Chapter 10
| 20 May 2011 6:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Katherine (Anonymous)
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YAY!!!!
Okay, I think sequals are dumb, if you want it in the story, put it in the story, sequals just drag things out.
There, my rant for the day..
| Title: Chapter 10
| 20 May 2011 12:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Loved this, despite the occasional misspelling.
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