Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 10 20 May 2011 8:26 am
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely, lovely end!
    That is indeed what 'loving family' feels like, Harry! :D

    Great job!

    I do wonder how it would have gone had it not been for the final success of the Enlightenment potion, though. I guess I'll be eternally wondering... ;)
    misundersnape...
Title: Chapter 10 20 May 2011 6:56 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet. :)
Title: Chapter 9 17 May 2011 5:09 pm
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't kid yourself, Severus...

    Wonderful job! There were times I was so disappointed in Severus, but other times I was elated that he rose the occasion. I've always said he had it in him to be the most wonderful man... but it just needed to be nurtured from him; and unfortunately hardly anyone took the time to nurture anything from within him - except the dark side... :(

    I'm looking forward to more of this...
    Thanks.
    misundersnape...
Title: Chapter 3 17 May 2011 9:40 am
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL! 'Piss God', indeed!
    Now 'that' had me chuckling hysterically. I haven't reviewed yet, well, I guess because I was feeling a little bit lazy, but now I just had to at reading your a/note.
    This is a fun, enjoyable story!
    I'm disappointed at Severus, expecting too much from an 8 year old. (And I know technically they are your errors) But his spelling isn't perfect either! (You might want to check over his letters lol ;) )
    Anyway - good job so far.
    misundersnape...
Title: Chapter 9 16 May 2011 10:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I had such a lump in my throat! Was it kind to show him another life and then make him go back to his? Thank you so much
Title: Chapter 9 16 May 2011 9:36 pm
Reviewer: Kari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was heartbreaking. I feel so sad for little Harry and Severus. He is so stubborn... Very well done.
Title: Chapter 9 16 May 2011 7:35 am
Reviewer: Reverie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter is very heart- melting! I could really feel the longing here in Harry.

    I can't wait for the last chapter, yet I silently wish there were more chapters before the end of the story!!

    This is really good! :)
Title: Chapter 9 16 May 2011 6:39 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    AWWWW! Please update soon! I have to know what happens next!
Title: Chapter 9 14 May 2011 7:28 pm
Reviewer: phoenix1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh that was horribly sad! I want Snape to go get him right now.
Title: Chapter 9 14 May 2011 4:29 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love the story and the new chapter and I can't wait to see if Snape can forget Harry as he is an unforgetable child... I hope you update soon... to bad it will be the last chapter in this brilliant story

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