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Reviews For Unsaid
That is indeed what 'loving family' feels like, Harry! :D Great job! I do wonder how it would have gone had it not been for the final success of the Enlightenment potion, though. I guess I'll be eternally wondering... ;) misundersnape...
Wonderful job! There were times I was so disappointed in Severus, but other times I was elated that he rose the occasion. I've always said he had it in him to be the most wonderful man... but it just needed to be nurtured from him; and unfortunately hardly anyone took the time to nurture anything from within him - except the dark side... :( I'm looking forward to more of this... Thanks. misundersnape...
Now 'that' had me chuckling hysterically. I haven't reviewed yet, well, I guess because I was feeling a little bit lazy, but now I just had to at reading your a/note. This is a fun, enjoyable story! I'm disappointed at Severus, expecting too much from an 8 year old. (And I know technically they are your errors) But his spelling isn't perfect either! (You might want to check over his letters lol ;) ) Anyway - good job so far. misundersnape...
I can't wait for the last chapter, yet I silently wish there were more chapters before the end of the story!! This is really good! :)
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