| Title: Chapter 9
| 14 May 2011 3:36 pm
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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I loved this chapter. The only problem with it is in his longer comments Harry sounds to mature. But still, the emotion here was lovely.
i feel so sad for harry..
What a heart wrenching chapter. I really felt for Harry. You can tell just how desperate he is for someone who cares about him, and how Severus fears he could never be anything more than he is. Good chapter.
Wow, what an emotional chapter. Very well done.
Severus Snape, you turn right around, young man, and go get that little boy! I never...in all my life...of all the pig-headed....
I'm really enjoying this story, but I needed to yell a little bit at Severus. Perhaps the Enlightenment potion will push him to do what should be done. :)
I'm intrigued. I didn't think I would, but I beginning to really like this story, it's sweet, understated and beautifully done. This chapter has definitely turned me. Looking forward to seeing what you do next- will the next time Harry meets Snape be at Hogwarts? or before? There's greater angst potential for the former, but more AU story potential and goodfeeling factor with the latter. I'm sure you've got it all planned out anyway lol ;)
Good job!
CF x
Oh man that chapter just killed me. I was crying at the end, I felt so bad for Harry. He must be devastated. I'm really hoping you have a happy ending planned.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 13 May 2011 6:22 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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I love the new chapter and I can't wait for more Sev/Harry bonding
| Title: Chapter 8
| 12 May 2011 11:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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i love it! you are the best author ever!
| Title: Chapter 8
| 12 May 2011 5:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Kari (Anonymous)
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I absolutely loved the chapter. Looking forward to more.
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