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Reviews For Holding On
Title: The Luncheon 10 Dec 2022 11:31 am
Reviewer: Buchling (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how hypocritical the weasleys are in this series. As if Ginny had no part in getting pregnant. It was their job to make sure she received a good sex-ed and knew all the alternatives of contraception. The same goes for Bill and Charly as they are old enough to make sure she knew these things. As it is they are simply pratonizing gits. It is a bad joke to call it protectivness, they are only hurting their sister, who should have read them the riot act already.

    As for the series in general; yes it does feel a bit rushed. First it was about Snape being Harrys dad, then about the pregnancy and then the kidnapping all in a short amount of time. Yet it is interesting. The sequel seems to be a bit slower paced and feels Mord balanced so far. Hopefully you will finish it one of these days. I am looking forward to it for sure
Title: The Luncheon 30 May 2022 1:30 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Life in a relationship is all about sharing and making concessions to find a comfortable state of togetherness. This chapter highlights that so well. I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story unfolds! Thanks so much for your wonderful and amazing stories.
Title: The Luncheon 24 Jan 2021 6:59 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice of them to remember Severus and Draco even if it was at the end! I loved how Harry was so busy trying to make everything perfect. I think that was spot on with the way he was brought up. Thank you

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