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Reviews For Bully
Title: Bully 09 May 2011 9:14 pm
Reviewer: CrazyDragon (Signed) [Report This]
    ...the end? The END??!? Aaagh! NOOOOOOO!!! ::curls up under desk with a full box of tissues and a rather bewildered cat for a good long blubbery sulk::

    Author's Response: Sorry.  I'll keep thinking on possible expansions, but right now I just don't know where I'd go with it exactly.
Title: Bully 09 May 2011 8:17 pm
Reviewer: LaileeJane (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhh, I really liked this!!! Poor Harry, it nearly broke my heart when he apologized for looking like his father. Awww!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  That was definitely one of my more brilliant ideas, I think.
Title: Bully 09 May 2011 1:40 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful build up to the story. Love how Snape learned about Harry's homelife. I hope you continue with this.

    Author's Response: Thanks, though it'll probably be left as it is.  Sorry.
Title: Bully 09 May 2011 12:20 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a very good story.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Bully 08 May 2011 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice story =o)
    I hope you will write a sequel, because I think that it would be really great story! =o)

    Author's Response: Thank you, but there's no sequel planned right now.  Sorry.
Title: Bully 08 May 2011 10:39 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this. I can see Snape being all protective of Harry, once he managed to get past the "Potter brat" stage. I'd love to see a continuation of this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I've always imagined Snape to have an incredibly protective personality given the right motivation. 
Title: Bully 08 May 2011 10:16 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great story. I wish there was more.

    Author's Response: Thanks, but it'll be left a oneshot, at least for now.
Title: Bully 08 May 2011 8:57 pm
Reviewer: watercrystals (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this was a really great read! You wrote it so perfectly and I love the memory you chose (because so many others keep using the same one shown in 5th year, this is original), and really, everything about this fic was touching and in-character.
    I had to laugh when Sev missed the chair though and ended up on the floor!
    Will you expand on this? Continue it, I mean? It has such potential and while it's great as a oneshot, I would REALLY like to read more! If you can do this well with a sinle chapter, I'm sure the rest would be just as great.
    Anyway, thanks for the great read! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, and thanks for the compliment on the memory.  I just couldn't picture Snape ever willingly showing anyone that 5th year memory, ever, so I decided to make up something less traumatic and hope it turned out okay.  I'm also glad you think I stayed in character.  I was a little worried about Snape, especially at the end when he was being nice.  He can be a tough one to write sometimes.

    No plans to expand right now.  If an idea strikes me later, then... perhaps.  Thanks again for the awesome review!  

Title: Bully 08 May 2011 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That was really a beautiful story. I felt tears tug at my eyes darklight. You wrote that so beautifully.

    I'm glad that Snape and Harry reached an understanding and that Snape was so compassionate and protective towards Harry after learning of Harry's home life.

    I would love to see you expand on this story. Nice work.

    Author's Response: Wow, thank you!  I would be happy hearing that from anyone, but to hear it from you really means a lot because I've always loved anything of yours I've read.  I'm glad you didn't think Snape was too fluffy; I wanted him nice but still somewhat in character.  As far as expanding... well, I really wouldn't know where to go from here.  This was always meant to just be a oneshot, but if an idea randomly strikes me in the future, I wouldn't mind pumping out a sequel or something.  We'll see.

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