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Title: Chapter 2 26 May 2011 8:04 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, wow! I'd never considered the need for a metamorphmagus child to have an I.D. bracelet-- good one! Glad to see Severus slowly regaining memories, but it still makes me wonder what caused his loss in the first place. Good exposition throughout this chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Teddy being able to change his looks however he likes at the moment is bound to cause trouble, isn't it?
Title: Chapter 2 13 May 2011 11:01 pm
Reviewer: Hill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ok, that makes sense. I guess I was just confused by a reference in Ch1 that Severus was dressed rags, and wondering that Harry hadn't commented on that yet.
Title: Chapter 2 13 May 2011 8:46 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was good. It painted a much more clear picture of the people and their view points. I'll have have to sign in and add this to my favorites tomorrow :)

    Author's Response: Thank you for your gracious review. Chapter 3 was just posted, so I can't wait to see your opinion on it too.
Title: Chapter 2 13 May 2011 2:07 am
Reviewer: Hill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So...why'd Harry leave Severus in the corrider, dressed like he was for the night?

    Author's Response:

    Harry was groggy, half-conscious after all that vomiting in the bathroom - he probably didn't even notice Severus. Nor did Ginny, who was supporting him the entire way to the bed.

    Point two, it's Harry who's in his pyjamas, not Severus - Sev is still wearing what he wore in the prison - that is, his trademark black robes.

Title: Chapter 2 12 May 2011 11:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting take on the slave story thank you
Title: Chapter 2 12 May 2011 9:41 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    This is interesting. At least Severus is safe with Harry and Ginny. But why can't he act normally, if that's what they want? Some kind of monitoring spell?

    Author's Response:

    He was brainwashed in the prison - taught to hate his past and his former identity (that is, everything up to the summer of 1998). Now he just follows what he was taught.

    No, there is no monitoring spell at all.

Title: Chapter 2 12 May 2011 9:11 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this ! More please

    Author's Response: Chapter 3 was just sent.

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