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Reviews For Servitude
Title: Chapter 4 19 May 2011 11:50 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very cool I love what I am seeing More Please!

    Author's Response: Your wish was granted - read ch 5 and 6 and tell me what do you think.
Title: Chapter 3 14 May 2011 9:56 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh poor Harry!

    Author's Response: Don't you mean poor Sev? Or poor Hermione? Harry is not that bad in this chapter.
Title: Chapter 2 13 May 2011 11:01 pm
Reviewer: Hill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ok, that makes sense. I guess I was just confused by a reference in Ch1 that Severus was dressed rags, and wondering that Harry hadn't commented on that yet.
Title: Chapter 3 13 May 2011 4:58 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! He's going to spend all his time just getting the snarkiness back into Sev's attitude. And what happens if someone is unjustly enslaved? Can they be freed by the ministry?

    Author's Response: That's a question that's I'm going to answer a bit in Ch 4, and in (hopefully) entirety in the Ch 7 or 8, not yet written.
Title: Chapter 2 13 May 2011 8:46 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was good. It painted a much more clear picture of the people and their view points. I'll have have to sign in and add this to my favorites tomorrow :)

    Author's Response: Thank you for your gracious review. Chapter 3 was just posted, so I can't wait to see your opinion on it too.
Title: Chapter 2 13 May 2011 2:07 am
Reviewer: Hill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So...why'd Harry leave Severus in the corrider, dressed like he was for the night?

    Author's Response:

    Harry was groggy, half-conscious after all that vomiting in the bathroom - he probably didn't even notice Severus. Nor did Ginny, who was supporting him the entire way to the bed.

    Point two, it's Harry who's in his pyjamas, not Severus - Sev is still wearing what he wore in the prison - that is, his trademark black robes.

Title: Chapter 2 12 May 2011 11:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting take on the slave story thank you
Title: Chapter 2 12 May 2011 9:41 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    This is interesting. At least Severus is safe with Harry and Ginny. But why can't he act normally, if that's what they want? Some kind of monitoring spell?

    Author's Response:

    He was brainwashed in the prison - taught to hate his past and his former identity (that is, everything up to the summer of 1998). Now he just follows what he was taught.

    No, there is no monitoring spell at all.

Title: Chapter 2 12 May 2011 9:11 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this ! More please

    Author's Response: Chapter 3 was just sent.
Title: Chapter 1 12 May 2011 7:03 pm
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. That was a fast chapter, but very edgy. Good story so far. No doubt it'll be upsetting also...

    Author's Response:

    Someone on DA went so far that he said that the story was "disturbing". I like "edgy" more.

    I'm afraid the chapters aren't too long (2-3 pages in Word), but they each have some intriguing happenings in every one of them.

    And thank you for your praise! Chapter 2 should be validated soon...


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