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Reviews For Servitude
Author's Response: Your wish was granted - read ch 5 and 6 and tell me what do you think.
Author's Response: Don't you mean poor Sev? Or poor Hermione? Harry is not that bad in this chapter.
Author's Response: That's a question that's I'm going to answer a bit in Ch 4, and in (hopefully) entirety in the Ch 7 or 8, not yet written.
Author's Response: Thank you for your gracious review. Chapter 3 was just posted, so I can't wait to see your opinion on it too.
Author's Response: Harry was groggy, half-conscious after all that vomiting in the bathroom - he probably didn't even notice Severus. Nor did Ginny, who was supporting him the entire way to the bed. Point two, it's Harry who's in his pyjamas, not Severus - Sev is still wearing what he wore in the prison - that is, his trademark black robes.
Author's Response: He was brainwashed in the prison - taught to hate his past and his former identity (that is, everything up to the summer of 1998). Now he just follows what he was taught. No, there is no monitoring spell at all.
Author's Response: Chapter 3 was just sent.
Author's Response: Someone on DA went so far that he said that the story was "disturbing". I like "edgy" more. I'm afraid the chapters aren't too long (2-3 pages in Word), but they each have some intriguing happenings in every one of them. And thank you for your praise! Chapter 2 should be validated soon... |
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