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Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 27 Feb 2015 4:12 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    So Severus finally found out what happened. I wonder what Vernon will tell him? Not anything that will keep Snape from wanting to do serious damage to Vernon.
Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 28 May 2011 7:01 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhh!! :D Heee This is so good!

    Author's Response:

    :D

    Thanks!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 21 May 2011 8:37 am
Reviewer: astutia (Signed) [Report This]
    enjoying very much :)

    Author's Response:

    :D

    And again... ;) lol

     misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 21 May 2011 8:37 am
Reviewer: astutia (Signed) [Report This]
    enjoying very much :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Glad you are enjoying!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 21 May 2011 7:18 am
Reviewer: Slythering Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I think this is your best chapter so far!

    In response to your response - Haha, I love the repetition of that - when I said that it felt awkward in the beginning...hm... perhaps awkward was the wrong word for it. It's like, the beginning of both the first and second chapter felt rather squeezed of description, kind of rushed. The diction felt slightly stiff.

    Kinda make sense?

    However, this chapter was wonderful! It didn't have that all! It was much better, and oh so fun to read. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Okay, I understand better what you meant and I'll go over the beginnings of both chaps with that issue in mind and see what I can improve.  Thanks for getting back to me.

    I'm so glad this one was better in your eyes, and am happy to hear you enjoyed it!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 20 May 2011 7:13 pm
Reviewer: Katherine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cant wait for the next installment

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 20 May 2011 6:22 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is great! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thankyou, so glad you enjoyed it! 

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 20 May 2011 2:13 pm
Reviewer: Mozalini (Signed) [Report This]
    D: I am so looking forward to the next chapter now!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Just got to find the time to get the next chap up... hang in there... ;)

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 20 May 2011 10:07 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far! I really like how realistically you described the way Harry was injured, with tensions rising and everything. I also liked Vernon's brief moment of shock and regret; makes it much more believable in my opinion.
    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your review! 

    The realism in this fic was the greatest focus, so I'm glad you felt I hit the mark.  And yes, Vernon, whilst a horrid beast, did not mean to injure Harry.  So whilst he momentarily felt shock and guilt, he very quickly buried it, swiftly falling into his nasty habit of blaming Harry for everything... even in this case when he was obviously culpable.

    More coming asap...

    Thanks again.

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 3 - Puzzle 20 May 2011 4:33 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OOOOH! Very Good Go for it Sev and see the blood everywhere! ha Se them watching tv and laughing I bet! More please! *S*

    Author's Response:

    LOL - well... not quite yet... patience... ;)

    Thanks for the review!

    I shall get around to updating soon, I hope...

    misundersnape...


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