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Reviews For Building Bridges
Author's Response: :D Thanks! misundersnape...
Author's Response: :D And again... ;) lol misundersnape...
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you are enjoying! misundersnape...
In response to your response - Haha, I love the repetition of that - when I said that it felt awkward in the beginning...hm... perhaps awkward was the wrong word for it. It's like, the beginning of both the first and second chapter felt rather squeezed of description, kind of rushed. The diction felt slightly stiff. Kinda make sense? However, this chapter was wonderful! It didn't have that all! It was much better, and oh so fun to read. :) Author's Response: Thanks! Okay, I understand better what you meant and I'll go over the beginnings of both chaps with that issue in mind and see what I can improve. Thanks for getting back to me. I'm so glad this one was better in your eyes, and am happy to hear you enjoyed it! misundersnape...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! misundersnape...
Author's Response: Thankyou, so glad you enjoyed it! misundersnape...
Author's Response: Thanks! Just got to find the time to get the next chap up... hang in there... ;) misundersnape...
Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! The realism in this fic was the greatest focus, so I'm glad you felt I hit the mark. And yes, Vernon, whilst a horrid beast, did not mean to injure Harry. So whilst he momentarily felt shock and guilt, he very quickly buried it, swiftly falling into his nasty habit of blaming Harry for everything... even in this case when he was obviously culpable. More coming asap... Thanks again. misundersnape...
Author's Response: LOL - well... not quite yet... patience... ;) Thanks for the review! I shall get around to updating soon, I hope... misundersnape... |
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