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Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 27 Feb 2015 4:25 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    At least Severus is beginning to see Harry as someone other than James Potter. Though he should have taken Harry to Hogwarts for treatment before he confronted the Dursleys.
Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 28 May 2011 7:29 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Harry!! Awesome chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry had it rough for a while there.

    Thanks so much for the reveiws!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 25 May 2011 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the exchange between Severus and Petunia. Nicely played.

    Good chapter. ^^

    Author's Response:

    One of my favourite scenes...

    Glad you appreciated it too.

    Thanks so much!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 25 May 2011 8:03 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this really is an excellant story. i love that you didn't skim over both harry and severus' emotions!

    Author's Response:

    No, I like to keep up with both of them... their dynamics are very interesting to watch, and it's only enriched if you consider their internal justifications too.

    Thanks so much!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 23 May 2011 9:23 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I really like that the story's rather slowly paced; it makes it feel very real to me.
    Poor Harry, he is torn between protecting his "family" and admitting to himself that things need to change. I hope Snape can get over his "Harry bloody Potter" attitude and help him...
    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    I like how you phrased how Harry is torn between protecting his family, and admitting that he needs help to change things.  I imagine that if it were anyone but the fearsome, potentially violent and dubiously loyaltied Snape that Harry would welcome intervention, but he's stuck with Snape and consequently he's too worried the man knows no boundaries.  It's why he feared him at school, his behaviour and reactions have been unpredictable, or overly harsh and unfortunately Harry does not trust him to act appropriately.  Mostly Harry wants the abuse/neglect by his relatives to stop, and to feel included and loved instead; he does not necessarily desire punishment for the Dursleys, which is what he's fearing Snape will do.

    Yes, I hear you about Severus' attitude toward Harry, it's frustrating that such an intelligent man gets so hung up on such a silly thing and can't see to it to treat a child as he should, irrelevant of the child's paternity.  If I could get my hands on that man... *unintelligble, yet obviously dangerous threat grumbled*

    Thanks again.

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 23 May 2011 10:18 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh poor harry

    Author's Response:

    Agree, poor Harry, he's definitely having a rough day.

    Thanks so much for the review!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 23 May 2011 7:17 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Just two words: more and Kudos!

    Author's Response:


    Thanks very much!

    More coming asap...

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 23 May 2011 6:51 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. Update soon

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    More coming asap...

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 23 May 2011 6:51 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent story so far. I was wondering how long Harry would be able to hold it together. Surprisingly, a lot longer than I thought.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Yes, poor Harry finally cracked.  But before he was too concerned and concentrating on stopping Snape from hurting his rellies... but now, well, he has a little moment of feeling sorry for himself.  Vomiting kinda does that to you, huh? lol ;)

    More coming asap...

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 4 - Misunderstandings 23 May 2011 2:58 am
Reviewer: MiuBlaze (Signed) [Report This]
    I totally adore this story and chapter! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you twice! ;)

    More coming asap...

    misundersnape...


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