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Title: Chapter 5 - Running Hot and Cold 28 Feb 2015 1:17 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Severus finally got Harry to the infirmary. Pomfrey's unpleasant attitude towards Snape was a surprise though. Not very professional.
Title: Chapter 5 - Running Hot and Cold 28 May 2011 7:53 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    :D Nice!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 5 - Running Hot and Cold 25 May 2011 9:07 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Another good chapter. Looking forward to the next!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much!

    The next is up now...

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 5 - Running Hot and Cold 25 May 2011 8:17 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this was great. its interesting to see severus like this. uncomfy and vulnerable. i can't wait to see what the next chapter holds!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Funny you should mention 'vulnerable'  heh, heh...

    More up now...

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 5 - Running Hot and Cold 25 May 2011 6:44 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting so far!

    Author's Response:

    Glad you think so.

    Thanks!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 5 - Running Hot and Cold 24 May 2011 11:02 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this! Can't wait for the next chapter. :D One constructive criticism, though—I really can't imagine Snape ever retorting "I just DO." He's too acid-tongued and quick on his feet for that. Still, loving it!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Glad you are enjoying.  As for Snape's comment... I hear you, I shall give it some contemplation and consider alternatives, and if I find a better one I shall change it.  Without changing the outcome, any suggestions?

    Thanks again.

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 5 - Running Hot and Cold 24 May 2011 10:38 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH wow I wont mor eplease...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    More coming soon...

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 5 - Running Hot and Cold 24 May 2011 5:15 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad Harry's where he can get some help now. Poor thing! This was wonderful and I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Yes, Harry is with an expert now... so he'll be feeling better soon.

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 5 - Running Hot and Cold 24 May 2011 4:37 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Why, exactly, would those three in combination cause heart failure? I liked the chapter, didn't like the semi-cliffie though. At least Harry is in a safe place. Kudos, and more please :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!

    Oh, darn... you want me to explain?  But... but I'm not a Potions Master, nor a Healer... *sigh*  Well, though I never had any intention of detailing those particular details, I guess I could make something up to satisfy you...

    Hmm...

    Okay, well, it's directly linked to the ingredients used to compose all three of the potions, and Harry's poor condition.  Blood loss, and therefore low blood pressure mainly, but he has a raging infection too that is taxing his organs.  So the combination of some of the ingredients produces a new potion which is normally used to thin the blood, and low blood pressure, and diminished blood volume would strain his heart and the situatiuon would also starve it of nutients, ultimately causing heart damage.  There, satisfied?  *prays* ;)  :D

    Suffice it to say a Healer would know there are more appropriate alternative potions should a patient need these symptoms addressed silmultaneously.

    I will also say that you will see why I didn't feel the need to go into detail in the next chapter - it's a moot point, really...

     


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