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Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 13 Mar 2022 5:33 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I started this, knowing it wasn’t finished, and I’m glad I did. I think this is the first time I’ve read what may have transpired between Severus and Albus that led to the latter’s death. And brilliantly done.

    Of course, it goes without saying that I shall optimistically track this.
Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 05 Oct 2015 8:17 am
Reviewer: loz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a great story! So well written!! Everyone is in character- its such a nice feeling!!
Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 01 Mar 2015 4:15 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I hadn't realized that it was Albus calling for Severus. I was glad you included the scene of Severus working to save Dumbledore from the curse. Of course Harry would wake up with all the coming and going through the floo. Sounds like Harry is putting the pieces together of the relationship between his mother and Snape.
Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 22 Jul 2011 7:46 am
Reviewer: Perry (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! Can't wait for the rest :)
    Will Harry find out what's going on between Snape and Dumbledore before Dumbledore's death, or will it be like in the book?
    More Snape and Harry interaction please! :)
Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 08 Jun 2011 4:22 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    ^^ Awesome chapter. I really enjoyed this one. That Albus, though... *shakes head* Foolish old man!

    Well done! I'll be looking for the next one.
Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 05 Jun 2011 12:17 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked the enlarged scene in the office very well written thank you
Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 04 Jun 2011 4:07 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful Chapter! Harry's thoughts were great. Snape with Petunia was just what we all need to see. Good work.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!

    Glad it was to your taste.  Can't have too much Sev/Petunia conflict, as far as I am concerned... ;)

    :D

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 03 Jun 2011 2:13 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    VERY GOOD STORY! Please update soon. Also can you please find a way for Severus to find out Harry is his son? You don't need to do anything like transform Harry, but it would be neat! I also know that this would make the story kind of turn away from canon, but please have Severus or Harry (or with team-work) find a way to keep Prof. Dumbledore alive and fully healed. Maybe when Dumbledore visits Harry in the hospital wing, Harry unknowingly uses his magic to heal him and destroy Snape's Dark Mark and destroy the Unbreakable Vows tying him-this way he later comes to realize that even without his vows he -for some reason-enjoys protecting Harry. Doing this would set him on the path of finding out he is Harry's biological father! Oh as for the hair you could have Dudley do something to Harry that would make his hair so unruly. OR even have Vernon and Petunia never showing him how to properly groom his hair? Just a thought.

    Author's Response:

    Oh boy...

    Well, first off, thanks so much for your review. I'm so glad you've enjoyed the tale so far.

    Those are quite the suggestions... and though I appreciate that you went to the trouble I have to say that these directions in a fic are often the very reason why I stop reading someone else's fics.  I don't like the premise of Snape being Harry's father generally... but will read if the ideas are unique and believable, and I don't buy into a specially powered Harry, so having Harry cure DD and get rid of both the Dark Mark and UV is not something I could contemplate including in my fic.

    My angle with most of my fics is to take my plot idea and wind it through as much canon as possible, with a particular emphasis on realistic scenarios/dialogue, therefore the above ideas become even more unlikely.

    Nevertheless I appreciate your interest in my fic.  I hope you keep reading and enjoy the direction I do take.

    Thanks again. :D

    misundersnape...

     

Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 02 Jun 2011 11:57 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    very interesting!! i really enjoyed this chapter plx update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Glad you enjoyed.  My muse is cooperating at the moment, so hopefully I'll be allowed time to get the ideas written and not keep you waiting too long.

    :D misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 02 Jun 2011 7:22 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooooh, Dumbledore may be dying, but I'm still mad that he's sending Harry back. Poor thing!

    Author's Response:

    I want to comment on this, but have chosen to refrain for now... you'll see why in time. ;)

    Thanks so much for the comments.

    misundersnape...


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